|Reviews for In Sickness and in Health|
| Amu4ever chapter 4 . 1/11
Have you eve coughed so much that you saw black spots? A really strange feeling that is...
| Amu4ever chapter 3 . 1/10
Hmm...some Carlisle/Bella father - daughter fluff would be really appreciated :)
| Amu4ever chapter 2 . 1/10
Hope she doesn't get an overdosis. One of my class mates once managed to cause an allergic reaction, because he thought the phrase "the more the marrier" should be taken literally for throat medicine...
Well, sure didn't look merry with his face swollen and red...-sigh- Did seem very uncomfortable too...
| Guest chapter 8 . 10/7/2015
Loved it! So cute :)
| homeofshadowhunters chapter 5 . 2/4/2015
I know this story is already finished and this is not a flame either I actually like your story line but there are several things wrong with it:
1. Edward would be able to hear her going into the woods and taking her pills, he would know because of his vampire hearing. Your making him a little oblivious in this story less the vampire and more the little kid whose excited about his date.
2. Honestly have you forgotten that Edward can read minds? Seriously? As soon as he gets back with his family he's going to read their minds and he's going to know that Bella was sick. Bella's trying for him not to feel guilty or have any regrets but it's going to happen when he finds out anyways so the whole part about Edward not knowing's a flop
Not a flame I promise just constructive criticism so your writing can get better. One positive thing about your writing is that you have a lot of figurative language which is helpful for your readers to visualize your story
| Narges chapter 3 . 3/24/2014
| Narges chapter 1 . 3/24/2014
wonderful chapter :)
| pickled.pughead chapter 8 . 3/22/2014
I loved this. It was inspiring.
| TheNerd12 chapter 8 . 3/4/2014
Awwwww, that was cool.
You should be proud of that ending
| TwilightJemS chapter 8 . 2/26/2014
Another great story! I'm loving a glimpse of what might have been. :)
| Major-Fire-Blaze chapter 8 . 12/8/2013
loved this story! I always love a good sick!Bella story where Carlisle takes care of her. This is my top ten now! :3
| Some Kind of Sin chapter 4 . 10/20/2013
I really enjoyed this. I appreciate the skill with which you write and the accuracy you put into the story. It gives it a refreshing authenticity.
In fact, it had me squirming over here, reliving my own horrific experience with pneumonia. Wouldn't wish it on anybody. Ech.
I loved Carlisle in this. Perfect. They all were actually. More please!
| crotia chapter 8 . 5/19/2013
what a lovely story
| nepalipranshu chapter 8 . 9/11/2012
I love Edward in this story!
| Hedgehogs5428 chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
Love this story sooo much