Reviews for Tonights Girlfriend
Irish Charm chapter 3 . 1/26/2014
That was a great first meeting. It cracked me up that Bella got drunk and passed out.
Irish Charm chapter 1 . 1/26/2014
What a truly interesting story. It is so naughtily but I have a feeling that there will be a remarkable love story as well. Can't wait to see where you take it. Oh wait I don't have to. Lol
Jenifer Cullen chapter 31 . 5/24/2013
Hey, Your story was awesome. A little grammar mistakes here and there, but other than that it is beautiful. I hope the outtake has the conversation between Alice and Jasper. If not, please add that too. Readers always like to know it in the writer's point of view. They hate it if it is left up to our imagination. Hope you make an outtake for that too.
Thx
cuteascherries chapter 31 . 4/24/2013
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kavelf chapter 31 . 4/19/2013
I just realized that I left my longer review on chapter 1 instead of the last chapter. I did read to the end of your story. Thanks again. I really enjoyed your tale.
kavelf chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
I've really enjoyed your story. I mean the following with the kindest of intentions. Your story has so much potential. Do you have a beta? It feels like have a couple of people to toss your ideas around and proof your writing would be very helpful. There were little things that didn't quite flow properly in terms of tine line. Then there were threads that could have been developed further or story lines that could have been clearer. There were also
moments where the wrong words were being used. But the skeletal structure of the story
was wonderful. I really wanted to read
through to the end to see how things were
resolved. I say bravo on plot and if you have the energy, find a couple of good friends to help you with the rest. There is so much potential here.

Thanks for the words. :)
charlottie98 chapter 21 . 3/24/2013
Im loving this story so far!
Cant wait to see what happens next!
:)
Irabella RobSten chapter 30 . 3/2/2013
I love it!
Irabella RobSten chapter 28 . 3/2/2013
Glad that everything is clear with Carlisle.
Irabella RobSten chapter 27 . 3/2/2013
Still an a**.
Irabella RobSten chapter 25 . 3/2/2013
Finally they meet again! :)
Irabella RobSten chapter 24 . 3/2/2013
Right now I really, really hate Carlisle.
Irabella RobSten chapter 21 . 3/2/2013
I'm glad that its not Tanya but not too glad because its Lauren.
hardygirl87 chapter 31 . 2/25/2013
I loved this story it was amazingly written.
NabStew chapter 30 . 12/28/2012
Just finished reading it Charlie! and loved it! I would want it to be longer, but it's ok, I really liked B&E relationship :3 ly
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