|Reviews for I Dont Mind|
| madlover30 chapter 12 . 7/10/2013
i wish you would update this :)
| Guest chapter 12 . 2/17/2013
| KarateC18 chapter 12 . 12/27/2012
Really, really, really good! Please continue! It's really good, almost brought tears to my eyes, and definitely made me laugh. Please continue!
| Guest chapter 12 . 10/25/2012
I really really like your fanfic i hope you can update soon!;)
| ChibiRealm chapter 12 . 10/13/2012
Awesome story so far. I love the relationship between the Eclare. I really would like to see how things progress at Eli's house and what her dad will do. Will he go over there to get her back? Will Clare ever stand up for herself? Or will something happen between her and Eli (like a disagreement on how to handling the situation with her dad) that might send he to the edge? Can't wait to see what happens!
| M.E.Potter chapter 12 . 9/30/2012
Wow. This is pretty good. Great job.
| xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx chapter 12 . 9/29/2012
I don't honestly know what to tell you first - the fact that I literally teared up when you mentioned my stories in your AN, the fact that I totally did a happy dance when I saw that you had updated, that I totally loved the cuddling and the banter, the fact that Adam makes me laugh out loud, the fact that I actually jumped when her dad came home, the fact that I was holding my breath during that rumble scene, or the fact that I did a second happy dance when he said she could stay at his house.
A lovely, lovely update! I would love for you to write more stories, but please don't give up on this one! I love this one so much and actually look forward to your updates. Like I said, happy dance. Keep up the excellent work :) :) :)
| mynameisqwerty chapter 10 . 9/28/2012
'that god damn sexy smirk'
so SO true
| mynameisqwerty chapter 4 . 9/28/2012
Aladdin reference? Really?
It's okay. I love Aladdin too.
And I love this new twist on the story. Usually I'm a real stickler for sticking to the story and simply "embellishing" with fanfiction. but for some reason I don't care that you're mixing it up.
Can't wait for more ...
| degrassiluver18 chapter 12 . 9/28/2012
Love can't wait for more!
| degrassiluver18 chapter 11 . 9/28/2012
Love can't wait to find out wat happens next!
| perfectlybroken66 chapter 12 . 9/28/2012
I'm so glad you're uploading so fast :) Even if they are short chapters.
| perfectlybroken66 chapter 11 . 9/28/2012
Update soon :) It's really good.
| xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx chapter 11 . 9/28/2012
Alright, you know I love this story, but I am going to have to give some constructive critisim and I really hope you don't mind or take it the wrong way. Just know that I love this story regardless. However, there are some things than can be fixed via proof reading a little more carefully. Sometimes you type "of" instead of "off" or "back" instead of "bag." I know what you mean, but sometimes it can be distracting at times. I know how it is though because I have done it too - your brain works faster than you can type and sometimes when you're caught up, you hit the wrong keys and make small errors. Just something to work on. I hope you don't mind me saying that and that I'm not being too nit-picky. I do truly love this story.
Okay, Bullfrog and Adam are a riot! Oh my goodness! Maybe you could a scene where they both gang up on Eli and pick on him for it. And Eli just wants to melt into a puddle and they fist bump or something silly. Anyways, I love their little comments. Bullfrog's "USE PROTECTION" was great! And I loved the steamy conversation on the love seat about pajama attire! Very nicely written! And then Adam's, "Honey I'm Home!" LOVED IT! I can just see the death glare Eli was sending his way.
Ahh you left it on somewhat of a cliffy there! And just when I thought I couldn't get anymore excited for an update lol now I really want to know what exactly he picked! Eli's so sly!
Anyways, still an excellent story. I was so excited to see that there were two updates for it. Keep up the excellent work! Maybe just proof read a bit more. I know it's tough. Sometimes after I write I do not want to really reread what I've just written. So sometimes I'll upload it and walk away for a bit and let the words kind of get out of my head, and then go back and reread it to make sure they're aren't too many errors. We all make little goofs though. Still an excellent story. You are so good at capturing the moments and I can truly see the characters saying these things - right down to their facial expression. You got them all down pat! Excellent! :)
| xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx chapter 10 . 9/28/2012
Aww, thanks for the shout-out in your AN. Of course I'll keep reading! I am in love with this story! This chapter was too perfect for words, but I'll try. Some my favorites parts were, besides that steamy dream:
Clare tries to hide her smile by burying her face in my arm. I use this opportunity to mouth to Adam to Shut Up. He puts his hands up innocently as defense.
Loved it! I can totally picture her doing that and I love how Eli kind of stood up and told Adam to back down and cool his jets lol
"I smile Clare, you just have to be special enough to make me."
Okay THAT was beautiful. Seriously. I must have sat there and reread that line like five times, smiling to myself the whole time. So cute! I can practically hear his voice saying that. Perfection! Not to mention that Mr. and Mrs. Goldsworthy thing was priceless. I can just picture their faces - and Adam over there trying not to lose it - as she said that! I love the English assignment. Ms. Dawes is a sneaky one! Can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the beautiful work :)