|Reviews for A Look Into The Future|
| Kisses Under The Apple Tree chapter 7 . 2/3
please explain what Hiatus is, and can you please update soon!
| JeannieCantrell16 chapter 6 . 11/2/2013
I really like your story and if I say so myself you are a genius and your story idea is awesome.
| alyssamcgrath chapter 6 . 9/29/2013
I'd love to read what comes next!
I want to know how this story continues!
Please Update Soon:)
| AMW chapter 5 . 9/29/2013
Couple things...the story has promise, but you need to fix a few things.
1. If Annabelle is supposed to be Sirius Black's daughter, then you should stop referring to Harry and Annabelle as twins because it gets confusing for a reader to keep seeing twins, but then hear that she has a different birthday and last name.
2. it would be good if you could add an explanation as to why Annabelle is with Harry, meaning was she at the Potter's house that night and that is why she has a twin scar or did Dumbledore take her after Sirius was put in prison
3. Not yet seeing how this is a crossover with Twilight
Like I said at the beginning you have potential with the story there are just a LOT of inconsistencies that need to be fixed.
| Sol Spell Diggory chapter 6 . 9/29/2013
Yes! Please do! It is better to have a crappy chap than none... At least I speak for myself! I would love to have a nice chap to read, though!
Update as soon as you can! Crappy or not!
| Rea558750 chapter 6 . 9/29/2013
Can't wait for the chapter
| MistressoftheDark12 chapter 5 . 6/22/2013
Update when you can please
| Yemi Hikari chapter 4 . 5/23/2013
The rules and guidelines of this site clearly state two things in the rules. Number three under actions not allowed is "copying from a previously published work (including musical lyrics) not in the public domain". Rowling's books are not in public domain as they are still under copyright. Copying as much as you have also constitutes plagiarism even though you do credit as being her work because it makes up most of your work. Also, even though you changed and added words, it still constitutes plagiarism as it doesn't mean word for word. Rule three under entries not allowed is "MST: comments inserted in between the flow of a copied story," which is exactly what you're doing.
You either have to remove this to another site that allows it... though you'll have a hard time finding another site that does allow this as it is a plagiarism and copyright issue, or edit it so you don't quote from the books. And yes... I know there are other stories that are like this. They also get a warning when I come across them and they will also be removed by the site admins if reported as they infringe on the original writer's rights. So please, do the right thing here.
| TheBlondeMonster chapter 4 . 3/17/2013
| alyssamcgrath chapter 4 . 1/21/2013
can't wait for more:)
| Team1DUnionJcat chapter 4 . 1/20/2013
Brilliant chapter! I love it! Please update whenever you can! :D
| Antara93 chapter 3 . 11/17/2012
m sorry but m so confused rite now but seriously its very interesting cant wait 2 read more plz plz cont soon and is bella d bella frm twilight nd dose she turn out 2 sirius daughter
| Carlaisabel chapter 3 . 11/9/2012
please update soon
| Sol Spell Diggory chapter 3 . 11/9/2012
What the heck?
Sirius, you moron! You have your possible child in front of you and you ask if there will be food?! What's wrong with you?!
What was it?! What changed?! What made Bella start to dissapear?
Update it soon!
| Peyton-Alice chapter 3 . 11/8/2012