|Reviews for Demon Tail|
| Happy-Red-Rabbit chapter 5 . 2/9
I hope this does get continued soon. Would the Straw Hats be the backup though? Since they are helping him in the manga?
I'd love to see a Papa-Chan!Doflamingo, it would be cute to see him so protective over Law and Kid probably would find it hilarious
| Trafalgar Newgate D. Mai chapter 5 . 12/11/2013
cant wait for the next chapter I love this pair (even though this is the first story I've read about them)
| shushimreading chapter 5 . 11/17/2013
This is a very interesting story and I really like it a lot! Super excited about the next chapter. Can't wait till you post it. Whatever you decide to do with Doflamingo I'm sure it will be entertaining. Kind of hope you just stick with KiddxLaw and not add SmokerxLaw. There is something special between Kidd and Law and I really hope you keep it that way. So are Kidd and Law going to really have their moment in the next chapter or is there going to be another interruption? Well I guess we shall see. Thanks for the story and keep up the great work! Take care!
| bleachdreamer0 chapter 5 . 11/9/2013
I get excited as a keep reading, then I realize there is no next chapter.
| Jo chapter 5 . 10/11/2013
Great story so far. I can't wait for Kid x Law sex time! Yup, I am a perv, lol. I am not a fan of Smoker x Law and I think I would like to Doflamingo as Laws dad cuz I think it would be funny as hell for poor Kid having to deal with overprotective daddy.
| misterbigeye chapter 5 . 9/29/2013
can i have hornypapa!Doflamingo, plzzzzzzz
| guest chapter 5 . 9/7/2013
| zubby-kun chapter 5 . 9/1/2013
Papa-chan and how about a little of smokerXkidd?
| Angelmon chapter 5 . 8/25/2013
I think Doflamingo should be choice 3 and you should have a Doflamingo X Law X Kidd threesome in the coming chapters! I don't mind some Law X Smoker but I want to see mostly Kidd X Law and some Doflamingo! Please update again soon!
| SilkyBlood chapter 5 . 8/18/2013
Is it possible to have steam coming out of your ears? Oh God, your fanfic makes me go red like a tomato. Can't wait for the next chapter
| kage kitsune 14 chapter 5 . 8/13/2013
Update soon, please!
| Cree101 chapter 5 . 7/25/2013
I first want to start off by saying OMG I love this! This is hot and funny and just overall a fun story to read! I love the fact that Law is such a cock tease even though he is supposedly "virgin"
Please incorporate some smoker and law in this. Make Smoker Law's sex slave or play thing. Make Smoker become his b*tch :D Or at least somewhat submissive. That would be interesting. Oh and I like the whole combination of horny and papa-chan Daflamingo. c:
And for your first fic, you are doing an amazing job. Please update soon! I can't wait for more! XD
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/24/2013
Oh my fucking glob! CLIFF HANGER MUCH?!
Doffy should by choice number three.
SmokerxLaw all the way.
Can't wait for the smexy times!
| Loojee chapter 5 . 7/18/2013
oh my fucking god! what a cliffhanger! stop teasing us, please! update this already! god, i just want to know how hard will Kidd pound Law's virgin ass! xD! i must say that this fanfic is worth the read and worth the review! kudos to the writer! and please update real soon! i am now currently sending you hugs and lotsa pheromones! yay! xD!
| BallofFluff chapter 5 . 7/17/2013
Hi! Haha, omg your story is lovely- Law's so adorable around Kid! :D Law's tail is sexy, but does he also have other demon attributes like horns, wings or a full demon form or something? Oh, and as for the Doflamingo question, I think a combo leaning towards papa-chan!Domflamingo would suit him best. Haha, I can just imagine Law doing his best to run away from Doflamingo like that- it'd be so cute, and Kid's reaction would be hilarious. Yup, can't wait for your next chapter and lookin' forward to the smut! :)))