Reviews for The Island of the Undead
Guest chapter 6 . 7/1/2013
why haven't you updated!?
Tiigerliily chapter 6 . 8/7/2012
I liked the Zombie Jardineiro part a lot. Storkos suspecting Dastardos has killed the old gardener is perfect,,.
Like Dastardos I wonder if there'll ever be a cure to the zombie virus though, since Pester's dead and stuff...
Toripocalypse chapter 6 . 8/1/2012
Oh man, I was ALMOST right about what was going to happen to Seiko! I expected something much more tragic and dramatic; for Eddie to jump in front of her and take the bullet himself! This is still great though; I'm so happy Eddie didn't die!

Everything is getting SUPER INTENSE, oh my God! This story gets better and better...I'm honestly speechless!

Seedos having mixed feelings about his dad's demise was PERFECT, as was Storkos blaming Dastardos! INCREDIBLE work! Can't wait to see what becomes of those guys! :D
Thunder Krystal chapter 6 . 8/1/2012
... Sorry, I had to grin when Seiko was about to be shot.
Tiigerliily chapter 5 . 5/15/2012
Great chapter! :D I loved the Petula and Fannie part, you write them amazingly! :D Fannie sort of reminds me of the dumb chick from Mean Girls... Haha! :P

I liked the Jardineiro part as well, you wrote him good! :D

The way Petula died was just BEASTLY though! D: Stabbed by Seiko... her worst enemy... I don't know why, but for some reason I'd rather see Petula stab Seiko! :P Haha, but it was a nice choice to make Petula die like that; it shows under how much stress Seiko's put! :D

You've writing has improved HEAPS by the way! :D Keep on writing, this story's interesting and so are others you'd mentioned you'd do on your profile! :D
Thunder Krystal chapter 5 . 5/13/2012
Yay! Petula's dead! I never liked her XD

Awesome chapter
Ultimate Hunter X chapter 5 . 5/12/2012
Lol, fail on seiko's part. Still doing good on it
Toripocalypse chapter 5 . 5/12/2012
I am SO SO SO SO glad you didn't abandon this, because this is completely, utterly AMAZING! I honestly would have cried if you left this story behind; it's your best!

Jardiniero's death...might have been a quick scene, but the impact on everyone will be interesting. Leafos would cry her eyes out and Dastardos and Seedos would throw a party! Hahahaha, maybe not to that scale, but they wouldn't be doing much mourning.

The scrap between Petula and Seiko was written BRILLIANTLY, I love how everything in this chapter came together!

Sparty's concern about Sahari is adorable, too...oh, I hope she lives. Pregnant people dying always makes me upset...

Fannie's death was GREAT too. Poor girl; being abandoned like that! The last thing she witnessed was Petula running away and betraying her!

Petula deserved what was coming to her.

In other news, I loved the description you used for Fannie's mask...and I loved the description in general! BRILLIANT work, SUPER excited for more, buddy! I'm IMPRESSED! :D
Marie chapter 4 . 5/7/2012
OMG, this is the greatest fic in the whole entire section here! Your OCs are super super awesome and the plot is SO GRIPPING! I'm dying (hehe) to see who will die and who will live!

Please please PLEASE write more! I'M BEGGING YOU!
Tiigerliily chapter 4 . 4/23/2012
Nice chapter! :D

I love the part with Seedos and Gretchen. Darn, if anyone's going to survive this whole zombie apocalypse-thing, it's her! :D

Arfur having weapons is so funny! XD I don't know why I feel that way, I just do.

Bart being worried about Gretchen is so cute! :D

The one I am worried about is Jardineiro, though! D: I hope he'll be okay, but on the other hand, I wouldn't care so much if he died, eventhough he's my favorite character! :P
Toripocalypse chapter 4 . 4/21/2012

YESSSS, I love how Gretchen is kicking ass and taking names! She might have inadvertently caused Seedos' demise by making him leave his house, but I'm glad to see that she's taking care of herself.

By the way, you write gore FANTASTICALLY. Whoa.

And then Eddie shoots Dustin in the ass... XD Oh geez, Arfur, way to go with forgetting to set one of the guns!

Poor Leafos, having to fish that bullet out of Dustin's ass...and then finding out that her family's in danger! ;_;

No one's worried about Storkos? Well, zombies can't fly, so I guess she's safe for now. :'D

I love Bart's faith in Gretchen, hehehe! This was PERFECT and I am very excited for more!
Thunder Krystal chapter 4 . 4/21/2012
Ultimate Hunter X chapter 3 . 4/14/2012
Can the pinatas become zombies?
Toripocalypse chapter 3 . 4/14/2012

I agree with Tiigerliily, sad to see Patch get killed off, but oh man it's a good move! Now there's no doctor around to help people!

The Bear and Seedos bit was SUPER INTENSE as well! I can only hope that person who grabbed Seedos was Dastardos...I'd want there bro-protection thing to go on for a whiiiiiile so if Seedos died Dass would feel even WORSE. OH MAAAAAAAN.

And of course Lottie and Willy are still arguing despite the circumstances...ah, Lottie, you might be amusing, but I hate you so. Hope you get decapitated.

Tiigerliily chapter 3 . 4/14/2012
Nice chapter! I just loved Dustin, he's a strange one! :)

Poor Patch, I liked his character! :P Killing him off was a good move though; now the survivors don't even have a doctor if something wents wrong! :D

Oh God, the part with Seedos and Bear was THE BEST! :D I love how you write for both of them, keep up the good work! :D
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