Reviews for Watching Her
Kelly457 chapter 30 . 1/19
Loving this story and can't wait til they actually meet face-to-face!
Kelly457 chapter 18 . 1/19
i loved it, I did!
Sara aka Nikki Black chapter 49 . 1/5
I loved it!
They are so cute. I'm glad you continued it because I didn't want it to be over, so many unanswered questions. What happened to Renee, how it went when she met his friends and more of them now that they finally saw each other.
Thank you for sharing it.
agoogoo chapter 18 . 9/13/2016
it's always an exception coz it's Edward and Bella. But the same creeper behaviour from anyone else (and especially in real life) would be beyond terrifying
agoogoo chapter 18 . 9/13/2016
it's always an exception coz it's Edward and Bella. But the same creeper behaviour from anyone else (and especially in real life) would be beyond terrifying
QueenGB chapter 49 . 8/29/2016
I'm sorry I know ongoing reviews matter but I just couldn't stop. Iam always on the search for the perfect balance of exploration, character development, hurt, joy and strong writing and you have captured all of those elements beautifully here. It is rare to truly love and adore both Edward and Bella in fanfic. But damn you have done it bloody brilliantly! Thank you so much! So freaking beautiful;-D
cctwilight chapter 50 . 3/17/2016
I have enjoyed reading this story again.
Guest chapter 17 . 2/28/2016
Edward was very nice (in his head) at what he thought of Mrs. Cope, from the way she smelled to her pinches etc. But I thought she was sweet and her concern for Edward knowing he's alone was adorable. But yeah, a young guy wouldn't think said "old" lady was sweet. I don't like when Older characters are
looked down on. Must be because I'm old too. Anyway, I wonder what made Edward know that the nurses were talking about Bella right away?
BellaTesoro chapter 49 . 3/1/2016
The build up to their eventual meeting was so exciting. When Bella finally saw Edward and the little details like his green eyes...and just him...was so sweet and the whole scene was oddly romantic even though they were in the middle of school and other kids around them. Finally! Awesome.
I really enjoyed this story. It was suspenseful, with an intriguing premise, the characters were interesting, and the slow burn was intense. I would have loved more time with them one to one in person but I'm guessing the second part to this story might have that.
Thank you for keeping your stories here so we get to enjoy them!
BellaTesoro chapter 46 . 3/1/2016
I think it's a shame that Bella couldn't have be part of their birthday celebration like Rose and Alice got to do with the boys. Of all the people who needed a day like that it was Bella. But this we know, and we know her time hasn't come yet, but I don't have to like it. It was great that although Bella wasn't there, she managed to support Edward when he needed it most, worked, he's in.
BellaTesoro chapter 45 . 2/29/2016
As hard as it must have been for Edward it's got to be even worse for Bella. At least Edward's seen her, he knows that he's attracted to not only her sweet personalty but he's attracted to her physically as well. For all Bella knows, Edward could be all sorts of unpleasant to look at. But then again, she's
attracted to his great personalty. Still, as a young girl, it must have been so hard not to look and find out what he looks like.
BellaTesoro chapter 44 . 2/29/2016
This was my favorite chapter so far. Having them so close and strong enough not to just turn that corner and be there for each other...well, I couldn't have done it. When Edward grabbed her hand and kissed it...so freaking sweet. And Bella so very supportive of what he's about to do and making those
soccer decorated cookies... These two are precious.
BellaTesoro chapter 43 . 2/29/2016
Yeah agreeing to email or text makes sense. Although seeing each other would make better sense.
BellaTesoro chapter 42 . 2/29/2016
This chapter truly was sad. In one respect it made me happy that Bella isn't as alone as I'd thought. I though Phil had just checked out, and didn't want to have to deal with the loss of his wife, see her
that way and take care of a teen. But this chapter showed he loves Bella and he's trying to do the right thing by her, give her time. So sad.
BellaTesoro chapter 41 . 2/29/2016
Edward is such a good son, doing all those chores, even the bathroom! But, he did one wrong thing, he sort of lied when asked about Bella. I get that he doesn't want how he knows her to come out to his parents but why not tell him he's seen her and that he'll try to engage her in his group...?
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