Reviews for A Romeo and Juliet Love affair
Aiyanna Clearwater chapter 10 . 1/22/2018
This is a lovely story!
jhoodfireball chapter 10 . 11/27/2017
Soo worth a sequel
Meiyo12 chapter 10 . 11/14/2016
I always re read this story! Best yaoi story for victorious! SUUUUUUUGOOOOOOI!
Guest chapter 10 . 6/22/2016
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
That was so sweet
Jeff chapter 10 . 1/10/2016
Oh my god! I LOVE THIS STORY. IT WAS SO GOOD. NOT GOOD BUT... WORDS THAT CANT EXPLAIN IT. I READ FROM CHAPTER 1 TO 10. LOVED IT. AND I CANT BELIEVED I FELT A BIT IF PAIN TO WHEN BECK BROKE UP WITH ROBBIE. MY GOD A U EVEN CRIED. SUCH A BEUTIFUL STORY. AND THANKS HOPE YOU COULD WRITE ANOTHER ONE JUST LIKE THIS ONE. GREAT WRITE. YOU SHOULD MAKE IT INTO A BOOK. . Thank you for the great story.
DokiDoki0725 chapter 10 . 1/2/2015
I like how it ended. Not too angsty. Not too catchy to make me feel sad. I like it! Especially for time skips, it hard for me to finish good, complete stories. I don't really understand completely why I don't like time skips, but the point is that you made the ending just right.
I read this all in one night, like I usually do with stories, and I gotta say you did great! I have to complement on your writing, I was good and easy for me to understand, even though there were a few mistakes in spelling and typos. The plot was just perfect for me to read, the kind I love: romance, smut, jealousy, angst, reconcile, truth, philosophy, justice, and happy ending. I know that's a lot to expect from a fan fiction and I'm picky for that... the only thing that bothered me was the time skip. Nothing wrong with the way you did it, its just... idk... the fact that so much had passed from my general knowledge of them. I just like to keep stories in the present. For some reason, I knew a time skip was coming and I was right, but I didn't avoid it cuz I wanted to finish this good story... it wouldn't be complete to me if I didn't finish it.
Speaking of which, I thought the wedding was for Beck and Robbie, but turns out to be for Joey. I didn't expect that! I gotta say, I was glad, it wasn't for them though I don't know why...
I loved the plot, basically, and I enjoyed reading this story! P.S I also really liked the smut and Beck x Robbie moments!
DokiDoki0725 chapter 9 . 1/2/2015
Still that was deep... I'm getting the feels from this, the feels! Its very inspirational and I'll read it again if I ever feel down. To tell you the truth, I didn't expect reading a homosexual rights speech here in this story, I'm not complaining or anything... its nice to read something I didn't expect and convenient that it relates.
DokiDoki0725 chapter 6 . 1/2/2015
For a moment, I thought it was going to be Joey. But it makes more sense and adds more to the twist of the plot if its the dad. That b*tch! How did he f*cking know about his son's love affairs, he wasn't even there! That conceited-homophobic bastard of a father! Isn't Beck and his family legal? What is Robbie's father anyways?
DokiDoki0725 chapter 3 . 1/2/2015
Nothing bad happens right? With the porn flick right?
DokiDoki0725 chapter 2 . 1/1/2015
I like jealous Beck! I like it when the dominate one gets possessive and protective over their cute submissive! *squeal*
Butterscotch chapter 9 . 12/27/2014
A prayer for Bobby? There was a movie on that; it comes on lifetime every once in a while.
ihrtryoma chapter 9 . 6/2/2014
A bit long but I think you'll find it's worth it... I think

A pretty good chapter but... your counter could use a little work. You could counter with the fact that there are a lot of things in the bible that were only guide lines for that time period only. Alot of times, some parts of the bible (due to the fact it was written by several diffrent people) were used to document laws. For example it says that Prositutes should be stoned and no one should eat shell fish (no seriously it does). These laws were to prevent sickness because we didn't have the medicine available 300 or so years ago and the same applies for same sex well sex. That part could be justified as a precaution against sexual spread diseases.
Therefor, the reason the bible says that wouldn't have been said by God or Jesus or any one time in the bible that ever says that. The bible is supposed to be used to take the good morals and stories to model to be a decent human but now it's used to justify the wrong things.
You use the term written by 'insecure idiots' and in real life people will get offended
Well I hope this was helpful, sorry for the ramble...
Lissy Stage chapter 10 . 6/21/2013
As sweet as this story is, you need to work on your sentence structure. The way you worded things, especially without commas, makes it hard to read. Maybe read through what you write first, before posting it? And continuously read through it, even after posting, so that you are able to spot any typos and errors?
Guest chapter 10 . 11/18/2012
The story was good until the last couple of chapters, then it seemed to get off track and as some advice on chapter nine, although you put up some very good arguments against homophobia, it seemed like you were putting more of your own opinion in it than actually being realistic and potraying a characther that really cared about her friend. So next time instead of going off the board and going ooc, try to potray your opinion in a more subtle way than causing a big commotion. I really wasn' t feeling the characthers personality during that. And lastly, lets not use the n word next time, hm? Because even if I know why you used it it was still pretty shitty and offensive.
Nicole chapter 10 . 8/17/2012
AHHHHHHHH! Yes yes yes! Thank you! Finally someone who sees my views on gay marriage :) I believe in and would've voiced EXACTLY what ace said in her speech! I am straight myself but have heard so many saying how being gay is wrong. Personally I don't believe god hates it otherwise religions worldwide and the bible would not speak of equality:). He may Not have intended it but he loves everyone :)! And thank you finally for that insert about JB I love him and don't see what he ever did to anyone. Btw Robbie and beck are sooo cute and beck is SOOOOO HOT ;) lol. Brilliant fanfic and beautifully worded. I'd love to see if my review helped if that's okay my email is and good luck with future work :) (btw if your religious views or opinion of JB are different from the fic no offense intended)
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