Please write some more, this is full of potential. I want to see how the rest of it goes.

hey please continue! this story is too funny!

I really needed a laugh, and oh god, this made me laugh. The snart. The Mmmbop. "I ate a cheeseburger and then masturbated." So funny... and then, just when it started getting really interesting, and sad - no more! Please come back and write more - it's hard to find stories that are funny *and* smart, and this is both.

I almost cried...and poor Sarah! That horrible therapist is one to place doubts in her head so she can't enjoy having a naked jareth in all his *drools* extremely manly glory awesomeness... (Eheheh lucky I can't drool in real life or I would have drowned already)

Teehee snarting..I learned a new word lol. Poor jareth..just imagine..if he and Sarah were married and she was fantasizing...teehee I think I have snarted before. Anyways, I love the story so far

I know this is kinda stupid and all but is Jareth really there or is he just invading Sarah's dreams?

Interesting plot, so far. I look forward to your next update!

More! I love it,

Oh heyyyy. This is greaaat. Made me laugh and wiggle. Lol cant wait for more

Ok awesome story, but weirdest thing ever, right? Ok so I'm reading your story and Im refusing to laugh cuz I'll get in trouble and I hear this noise in my ear and it happens EVERY TIME! Like there's some buzzer in my head saying there's too much pressure. Anyway, great story, very funny, and keep it up! ;)

WOW! I love this story! It's got an amazing plot (so far), actuall correct grammar, hilarious humor, and great entertainment! Props to you! xoxo

please continue. i nearly died laughing at the snarting comment

I laughed so hard at the comment you made at the end, so very hard! I nearly snarted! XB

I don't know if you intend to continue this or not, but I'm watching it anyway. And maybe stalking your profile a bit.

Oh my gosh! I just freaking laughed so hard by that "snart" comment you made!hahaha Great story by the way. Will there be more?:)

SUCH a good beginning... *gigglefits about the snart*