Reviews for Why, oh Why?
Cpsullivan2 chapter 1 . 8/30/2013
What in the world was that? I didn't understand it from the beginning of it. What was the point and the plot to this story? Please improve your writings!
Cece chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
At first I was like OMG WTF but then I was like ohhhh ok so I still liked it
Lovely But Lonely Rose of Life chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
Cute and confusing and funny and i loved it and keep up the totally awesome work person i dont know xD
Jolie luv chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
*phew* i thought sesshoumaru is cheated on rin, iam glad it's naraku disguised as sesshoumaru.

Good work :)
L3ftHRyd3r chapter 1 . 3/27/2012

Non-stories: lists, bloopers, polls, previews, challenges, author notes, and etc.

One or two liners.

MST: comments inserted in between the flow of a copied story.

Stories with non-historical and non-fictional characters: actors, musicians, and etc.

Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.

Chat/script format and keyboard dialogue based entries.

This violates rule five where no chat formats are allowed. An option to convert this into an actual story is plausible as is removing the story in its entirety. Please review these options to correct your violation.

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YinactiveY chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
Ah, I decided to read this again! Lmao!

"Look! Look at how many have us like this! Isn't it glorious!"

Indeed very glorious. -.-"

i forgot to mention that in the other review.

update soon.. these are so much fun to read than ff. XD
icegirljenni chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
WHAT? LOLLL I thought this is ARGHHH You fooled me!

Looks like Y's virus is gets on Di now!

The best part of this story is the first Sesshoumaru LOL

Ah I gotte message, evil as Naraku eh? HAHA

I am so done now. Good job, Di! Well done to Y! LOL
luuu chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
Sorry, but that was horribly dumb and terrible to read.