Reviews for The Experiment
lil joker 1989 chapter 2 . 3/29
Awesomeness :)
DracyGiuliana chapter 2 . 9/3/2014
Oh Christ, what have you done!? I don't even know what to feel now! My brain feels kind of like it's going to blue-screen on me any moment! So. effin. amazing. you have no idea. This was perfect! Just plain perfect. I... I can't even.
SinsofMidnight chapter 2 . 4/29/2014
Favorite line: "The words 'please' and 'Sherlock' appeared to be the only ones left in his vocabulary so he compensated by repeating them over and over again."

I love the sheer dominance and possession on Sherlock's part in this piece, the darkness of John's (incredibly endearing) danger kink, the edge of this kind of play...
I'm very shy to try out this sort of play in a piece because I find it's hard to do it believably.

Also, let's be honest: if Sherlock wanted to tie me up to recreate a crime scene, I'd probably have John's reaction -only with more hormones and breasts :P

Very nicely done. I shall wait anxiously for more of your work, my dear!

Sins
SinsofMidnight chapter 1 . 4/29/2014
I adore the last paragraph of this chapter. Just... perfectly Sherlock. and perfectly sexy.

I also like that you play with John's need for danger and excitement (I've noticed this throughout the fics you have here and may resort to stalking you on lj because you do it so well :P ) because danger is frequently all the enticement Sherlock offers John and it gets them into all kinds of trouble!

On to the next chapter!
Violet26 chapter 2 . 3/29/2014
Wow!, that was really, really good. I haven't read a John/Sherlock story in a long time and I'm so glad this was the first one I've read after all that time. You did a great job keeping John and Sherlock in-character and I loved the little bit of plot it did have. This is also one of the best porn stories I've read in a long time, good job on that too. Lots of great lines in this but I think one of my favorites was; "I see your heterosexuality is firmly out the window.", lol, love that line. Good tip in the A/N also! Great job!
IloveHeat chapter 2 . 10/31/2013
Holy cow! Seriously, I am rereading this right now.
ButterscotchCandybatch chapter 2 . 9/14/2013
Oh, that was so hot! John tied up and Sherlock crazy for him. Whew! I need a post-fic cigarette...
Blazing Glory chapter 2 . 8/4/2013
Anytime you wish to write such delicious PWP, I will be more than happy to read it. I find your portrayals of both characters to be fantastic!
Alaisabel chapter 2 . 6/17/2013
For some reason I turned into a puddle of giggles when I read the A/N... I have no idea why... Anyway, great job
Darkfire359 chapter 2 . 6/12/2013
Your author's note made me crack up hysterically.
T'is My Name chapter 2 . 3/29/2013
All that hot, guyxguy smexiness, then "Practice safe sex kids." I can't stop laughing.
Rose O' Sharon chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
Um . . . wow. Just . . . really . . . wow.

Um *trying to bring brain in to comment mode* Um . . . Great pacing. Good grammar. Interesting characterization development and very good imagery.

Nice job on this story. :D
softdrugs chapter 2 . 2/3/2013
Really great one! Very effective, to put it bluntly :)

I might however have considered a slightly longer buildup before John was really into it, it seems a bit abrupt, but hey, that is the only thing I would have adjusted :)
Motaku1235 chapter 2 . 1/25/2013
John now understands PHEOC; The Johnlock Method of Science. Lol.

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Fudge7000 chapter 2 . 1/18/2013
Hmmm, well... Keep writing these if you wouldn't mind!
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