Reviews for Ben 10: The Slayer Chronicles
sudhush chapter 1 . 2/1
Good Prologue too many OC's Dude
a.mario.ulloa chapter 7 . 1/27
dammit seems good but i cant handle the whole gods, or the fact that ben just realiced he did not remember how he got the watch off, the slayers subterfuge and the whole mystery crap, the memory loss is just wrong. its was good while it lasted. i will now give up on finding some ben 10 story
a.mario.ulloa chapter 1 . 1/27
question, you invented the salyers?
and i dont like the memory slip but hell, if you manage to write a good story, i dont care, it seems worth a shot, and i think you made a slip at the end, when he turns human and the wath is still blinking green, it says he can still turn into human...
MugetsuPipefox chapter 77 . 1/25
Loved that original theme reference XD
Oh Ben, hang in there! I had a feeling he'd have an episode once they left.
This chapter was educational! I didn't even know compartmentalising was a thing but, yeah, it makes a lot of sense.
Do I sense the introduction of Single Handed? (I loved that episode XD) Although this time around I think it'll be worse for Ben - alone in the Null Void in his condition... oh dear...
majishan chapter 77 . 1/24
oh ben...
pikachucat chapter 76 . 1/15
awesome story
Alfonse08 chapter 1 . 1/12
Interesting, looking forward to seeing where plan on taking this.
StardustPetals chapter 76 . 1/10
I don't believe I could adequately express how good I feel with this chapter, but I must at least say it is exemplary.
MugetsuPipefox chapter 76 . 1/10
I love storms. When I hear the thunder rolling in I'm always like HELL YEAH XD
Closurrreeeee! This was a really good ending for a chapter :3 And I'm glad those two could finally get some things straight. I doubt things will go straight back to the way they were (though they'd probably never be the same, anyway) but it's definitely a start.
Well done! (also was that a YGOTAS reference I saw?)
Jackson chapter 52 . 1/6
Na bih, we ain't spot nothing
pikachucat chapter 75 . 12/31/2015
Tal-oantez chapter 75 . 12/27/2015
you should crossover with the other time lines
MugetsuPipefox chapter 75 . 12/26/2015
Gwen's trademark comment omg XD
Well, that's one way to deal with the Vreedles :P And hey, Ben didn't break anything this time XD
Happy holidays!
The Ethereal Lord chapter 74 . 12/19/2015
Well. Short, yeah, but still cool.
like the way you write bout Bens dilemma. makes it seem even more real.
waiting on the next
MugetsuPipefox chapter 74 . 12/13/2015
References. References everywhere XD
I kind of like that the guys and girls split up - they don't get to do that very often and I think it's good for both parties. And it's good that they confronted Ben. I mean, you really should wait for people to open up themselves, but in cases like Ben, that's probably going to be never, so sometimes you need to give them a little push. (of course, you should never force them)
I loved Heroes United! So a suit based off their one is 100% okay with me XD
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