Reviews for A Woman in a Ball Gown, Shooting Some Aliens
Whyhow chapter 1 . 4/5
Fairly good despite the OC companion, which can be done well (here for example), but usually isn't. You should probably break up that one large paragraph, though: it was fairly well written but a little too much.
Hpdwlotr24 chapter 3 . 1/5/2014
Awwwww! God, your river/eleven stories are perfect!
amber.bullock2 chapter 3 . 9/1/2013
when will there be more?
MelodyPond-RiverSong chapter 3 . 4/30/2013
Aww, cute! I would definitely read that other story!
TomorrowNeverCame chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
Priceless. You nailed River.
louisechloe chapter 2 . 3/29/2012
Love it, looking forward to seeing what happens :)
SheWillBeAmazing chapter 2 . 3/29/2012
So, I really liked your story :) I was really hoping you were going to continue from the end of chapter 1. If you do the companion's backstory, do you think you could work in some continuation of this story? I would love to find out more about the companion meeting and reacting to River :)
Kerjen chapter 2 . 3/28/2012
I'm interested in River's story. I hope that will continue.
hermione-amelia-rose1479 chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
Actually, this is a pretty good eleventh doctor/companion/river thing. And the doctor's pretty well described too. But yeah, you should do Emmaline's back story, she, from the start, sounds really interesting.
vievere chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
Adorable! Very well written. You wrote the Doctor very well
SupernovaDancer chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
This was funny :)

I think you should give Emmaline's back-story - I really like this character. I think the character has the potential to be a good one in other stories - well-rounded, interesting without being overly promoted, strong enough to do things for herself, not falling all over the Doctor (I'm a devoted 10/Rose shipper myself, but 'just friends' is quite refreshing). I like her :)

I can just see River doing this..."a man about a thing, which I may or may not have shot" (actually, I just noticed that this didn't have the second indefinite article before 'thing' in the story, so I would just put out a general note to comb spelling and punctuation one more time)

Very funny, interesting OC, in-character writing, and a refreshing 'just-friends' mentality. I think you should continue.