|Reviews for Invictus|
| dididoitwrong chapter 1 . 6/2/2014
Awesome just simply awesome. What criticism? There's none needed not even possible.
| gobalbucs chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
I know you wrote this a while ago but I would LOVE to see a series out of this! Please?!
I love how Sirius acted toward FutureRemus and how he acted in sort of a possessive manner for his own Remus and how it's obvious that he loves him so much :D You simply MUST return and make a series of this! Please! This was really good and kind of sweet in places but ultimately sad when FutureRemus realized he was too late and I have to say that I felt SO bad for him! D;
Great job on this! Please consider coming back and continuing this! :D
| forgottenheroes chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
hello, i know you wrote this ages ago, but i think it would make an amazing series. even if you dont want to, could you possibly write a tiny paragraph about who it changes the future (or is that present?)? please?
Love Violet xxx
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
I'm interested in more! Please?
| Athena's-Dragon-138 chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
This is really interesting! I like the idea of the story a lot. I'd love to know what happens after...
| Child of Music and Imagination chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
MAKE A SERIES!
| Dwynn chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
I'm not used to review (english is not my native language so I tend to be rather shy when it comes to express myself hehe) but I like this story (I don't think I've ever read something like this before, usually it's the golden trio going back in MWPP era, so it's a nice change) and I would love to read more. That's why I added you on alert, I don't want to miss anything you might write about this whole stuff D
| Emma Black chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
Wolfstar potterverse. Do it. I'll cry every time, but do if you want to be totally canonical make sure Dumbledore knows about the horcruxes too.
| VampiressBlack chapter 1 . 3/30/2012
That was really good! Yes I would love to see more! Yay for future Remus!
Loved it! So emotional and not at all ridiculous like some time travel fics can get.
| The First Marauder chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
Ooh! Please contine! Pretty please with dinosaur sprinkles, cherries and all that other delicous jazz on top! I love you writing style and really enjoyed this story. Id really like to read more upon how knowledgable Sirius acts. And well I love wolfstar raising Harry :D
So, please, please, please continue?
| Kitty Cat chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
I would definitely read a continuation of this story. I really, really liked it and just want more!
| WillowDream203 chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
This story was heart-wrenchingly wonderful. I really highly encourage you to make this a series because I think that you really captured who the two of them are as characters as well as put a realistic spin on the romance between the two of them that so many Wolfstar junkies adore.
This is the first review (I think :/) that I've ever put on a piece of your work, which a horrible misstep on my part. I think your writing is absolutely fantastic and it just makes me want to read more and more all the time. Thank you for taking the time and putting this stuff out there. It really is brilliant.
Your loyal reader,
| BeautyIsOverRated chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
You should definitely continue this and for sure make a series! I'm enthralled. This was well written and I have always wondered how everything would have turned out if Remus went back and revealed the future.
| TechNomaNcer28 chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
OOHH!Mmmyyyyy!Now what a way to go with this!the way Sirius thinks of him as a different Remus but at the same time feels something for him because it's Remus anyway,really nicely done!
The emotions there,poor Remus, he was in such a state!And to see Sirius alive again but not being able to have him,that must've been painful!Awesome ideas and flow of things in there!