Reviews for The Messes We Leave Behind
xXxWolvesInTheNightxXx chapter 13 . 4/18/2013
I really enjoyed this! :)
The Death and the Strawberry chapter 13 . 3/23/2013
Wowo! I really loved your fic, in my language (spanish) there's not many fics of the vizards, so I want to ask permission to translate and publish it here on fanfiction. If you know Spanish or know someone who knows I can send you the translation before publishing.

Thanks, I'm waiting for your answer.

Juli :)
rockbabyval chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
BlessedRain chapter 13 . 4/7/2012
Omgsh this was soo good! Hahaha. I seriously LOVE all these pairings, and I think I dies when i found this story :D so yea, it was reeaalllyyy good, although i am sorta depressed that only Rose and Lisa kissed... Agh well it was still amazing :]
The Rish chapter 13 . 4/4/2012
I love happy endings. :D BUT SHINJI! ;_; I loved his comment to Hiyori. *heart* Great wrap-up to a great story!

On to the next one!
The Rish chapter 12 . 4/4/2012
Absolutely adorable admission. *heart* This was a good Rosa scene; not nearly as angst-ridden as it could have been, and for that I'm kinda glad.
The Rish chapter 11 . 4/4/2012

Well done, my dear. I'm too anxious for the next chapter to say more. But this chapter...yes. Just yes.
Ayase Reincarnated chapter 13 . 4/4/2012
Could not have ended better if you tried. The last 3 chapters of this mind-blowing fanfic have made me the happiest tayra in the world. There's not much I can say legibly because it would be mostly unintelligible babble and lots of random letters smooshed together. This fic has been the highlight of my year, as a fan of the Vizards. Buds & Bows was a perfect sequel too.

Thank you, seriously, for writing these pieces.
Ayase Reincarnated chapter 10 . 4/3/2012
You're getting really good at writing Kenshiro stuff, I swear. And it's a lovely thing since there can never be too much Kenshiro material in this fandom. They have the strongest bond of all the Vizards, I'd say.

Aha, poor oblivious Rose. But that's to be expected since Captain duties come before romantic feelings. I pity Lisa but I know things will get resolved eventually.

Hiyori's boldness...I am envious of it. She's fearless, in everything she does. And it makes me wish I wasn't such a coward.
The Rish chapter 10 . 4/3/2012
Oh, Mashiro, my heart aches for you.

Hiyori's reaction to "Shinji won't be happy" was flawless.

Great inclusion of an important plot point amidst the romantic retrospection, angsting, and flying feathers.
wanda lensherr chapter 9 . 4/3/2012
I think the scenes are just fine.
The Rish chapter 9 . 4/3/2012
Gratification! Sort of. Oh, I'm so glad Kensei decided to be a "real man" and visit Mashiro. *heart*

These scenes are considerably longer and more developed. Kudos! Keep up the great work, sweetie. CANNOT WAIT for the next update!
The Rish chapter 8 . 4/2/2012
Red alert! "Hell, if there had been any hatred in it to behind with it was long gone now." I think 'behind' was supposed to be 'begin'. I knew you'd want to know that.

I l-o-v-e this chapter. Oh my gosh. The exchange with Shinji and Hiyori, and...and...Rose and Lisa! That was amazing how you played it. And the last little bit with Shinji and Kensei. Best chapter so far. And I forgot to mention, you're improving even more with your scene development! Keep on keepin' on, girlie! You're doing great!
The Rish chapter 7 . 4/2/2012
Aw, Kensei~ getting kind of sentimental in the only way he can. I want to cry with Mashiro too. TT Pretty solid chapter, and I'm really anxious for more. So, off I go to chapter 8!
Ayase Reincarnated chapter 9 . 4/2/2012
Holy are my freaking hero. 3 chapters at once? That oughta put my withdrawal at bay. Was suffering with no updates all weekend. And then I find this...just wow. No words can express my joy right now.

The cute Kensei/Mashiro stuff is simple and lovely. Their relationship doesn't need a novel to be explained. Just glad to see that she has him back, even if just for a night.

I wanted to freaking cry at all the Rose/Lisa stuff. Why the hell is this couple always so sad? You did a grand job with it and it's a great bit of relief for a stressful day. Can't WAIT for more.
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