Reviews for The Mysterious Case of Luck
Guest chapter 18 . 8/4/2013
i thought it was in tje category romance but all gwen does is hurt ben and all anyone ever does in this story to ben is beat him up emotionally and then apologize but still do it again i look at t and m rated things for a reason to read about ben and gwen getting together not her hurting him
Masomalik chapter 18 . 3/26/2013
I want to see more on how ben becomes the ben 10,000
Guest chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
A This story is amazing!
TheDivineDemon chapter 18 . 2/7/2013
Sooo, how Ben 10000 came to be?

Anyway, nice story so far. I hope you update.
gonekrazy3000 chapter 18 . 12/3/2012
Oh my god. I need more. Please can i have more ? D:
Claytonimor chapter 18 . 9/16/2012
Hmmm...dark notes in it, some action, drama, and angst...and an ending that, while open to continuation, still leaves you feeling fulfillment...all in all I give is a 9 out of 10.
loool99 chapter 9 . 9/4/2012
AMAZING! Jaw dropping good ol ben tennyson goodness :D I praise you for your spectaculer work!
doc boy chapter 18 . 7/13/2012
Well I do think there's something missing. You said there's gonna be bwen in the end and it's gonna rise up like wild fire. Is this the end of the story or there's more? You can't just leave it like this. I also don't llike the fact that Ben left and gave up his dream to be a dooctor and all that. I reallly don't think an open ending is the right one in the case. If it's not the end then I hope the real ending would be a more happy one
PS: I really did have a suspecion that Ben will try to rape her. I figured it would reach a point where he couldn't take it and hold it in anymore
The Cretin chapter 19 . 6/29/2012
Dude, I live to encourage. I meant what I said. Yer one of the best in this fandom. Don't sale yourself short. You've proven you can do multiple genres, you made me laugh, you've had me wondering on the edge of my seat,etc. You've done it all. Your stories are an escape for me. I've read just about all the pairings for this fandom. Bwens and Benlies are my preferred. (The Benlie writers do write some good ones, Hell they write Julie better than the show does.) I've read good fics on all the pairings. As I said though, the Bwen ones stand out to me. I've joined the site so any time you want to P.M. me for advice or if you just want to blow some steam. I'll tell ya some details about my 2 friends I mentioned if you want. Maybe it'll give you some ideas. I can't wait to take another trip through that amazing themepark that is your imagination. Peace. Keep rockin
bowow0708 chapter 19 . 6/29/2012
Hm, I'm not sure whether to review on this or not, but I'll do it anyway.

I can't say that I'm surprised that I'm not on this list. My reviews are not what they used to be. I guess I'm more timid since that had happened, and I don't want something like it to happen again. I could quote my fic. "He will be treading on eggshells from now on." Because it kinda feels like that when I try to review. I'm so careful nowadays.
bennet001 chapter 19 . 6/29/2012
Wow I am happy and honored to be mentioned in a fic don't really know how to take the last part but I'm an optimists so I will take thumb with a smile and middle with a snicker thanks! Also i felt emotional when you used my catch phrase oh wow I just realized I have a catch phrase.:)
I have always said my review hold nothing back and they are always the truth I have read and reciewed each and everyone of this stories chapters both individually and as a whole I have not put up one review that I regret and to those authors who read this story and check the reviews don't be jealin I am reading your fics just can't make much progress. Chow Bennet out.
starmaker12 chapter 19 . 6/29/2012
Lol thank you for saying that I always try to always to get to the point but anyways can't wait to get the link for the final chapter in e-mail box can't for a awesome finish to a awesome story I hope to see more stories from ya

Sincerely starmaker 12
Long live mj 1958-2009
lordsesshomaru2 chapter 18 . 6/22/2012
The quick update was unexpected, as was the Sandra's reaction to Ben's revelation. You'd think that he revealed that he eats children for food. I liked that you wrote that despite Ben wanting her to be with him, he wants Gwen to come to him on her terms, when she is ready. It was also nice how Ben's mother realized her error and apologized, in a way. I'm not sure what to say about that final bit of the authors note; unless you're hinting that its either charmcaster, gwen, or maybe verdona; but that's only if she's in her anodite form. Who(or what)ever it is, I look forward to finding out.
bennet001 chapter 18 . 6/22/2012
Sweet I was just about to ask what happened with that guy I was surprised your going to continue though? A nice surprise.

This was defiantly a much brighter chapter then those that came before but also one of the saddest too if there is one thing no living creature can handle its a baby, a child crying (sniff) good work sort of sad to see This fic end but also really excited to closed how it ends. Chow Bennet out.
The Cretin chapter 18 . 6/21/2012
Damn man, you really had me goin there for a moment with Sandra's outburst. Looks like we're gettin down to the nitty gritty. Dude, this is one of, (if not THE) best Ben 10 stories I've read in a long time. Its got it all- action, drama, angst, tragedy- in a nice package. I salute you. Another fan (a polite Gwevin fan) once ask me how I can read Bwen and prefer it over all the other pairings. Among the many reasons I gave the one I hold strongest is the "nostalgic" feel that they give off. Ben10 is still going but everytime I read Bwen story its like images of blissful summers and peaceful autumns feel the head. You may find this a strange coincidence but growing up, I knew 2 cousins who fell in love. They were also 2 very dear friends. Rather than suffer the judgement of this town, they went into a self-imposed exile. Their story left those close to them divided. I was angry with them for awhile but not because of them falling in love, I was angry they left for years and didn't tell me where they went. I was scared. Didn't know if they were well off or bad off or what. They came back for a visit 7 years ago during a difficult time for me. It was awkward at first but came out alright. Guess what I'm trying to say is- Thank you for putting such a situation in a realistic, positive light. While many judge, they really have no clue what to really think unless they are faced with such situation. So once again, thank you for writing. You are really good. Every one of your stories have been enjoyable I think. BTW, I heard is gonna be doing some house cleaning on the M-rated stories. I don't think yours is in danger but be cautious. I heard its scheduled for June 23. In the meantime, I await your next update with interest. Keep rockin. Your faithful reader- The Cretin
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