Reviews for The Mysterious Case of Luck
Michael vey chapter 18 . 10/12/2015
What's with all the riddles!? I know what the thing is but I had to think for a minute
FlawlessMirage chapter 5 . 9/19/2015
Um... wut

How did Ben not notice his mother was pregnant?

Seriously O.o
Guest chapter 18 . 8/4/2013
i thought it was in tje category romance but all gwen does is hurt ben and all anyone ever does in this story to ben is beat him up emotionally and then apologize but still do it again i look at t and m rated things for a reason to read about ben and gwen getting together not her hurting him
Masomalik chapter 18 . 3/26/2013
I want to see more on how ben becomes the ben 10,000
Guest chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
A This story is amazing!
TheDivineDemon chapter 18 . 2/7/2013
Sooo, how Ben 10000 came to be?

Anyway, nice story so far. I hope you update.
gonekrazy3000 chapter 18 . 12/3/2012
Oh my god. I need more. Please can i have more ? D:
Claytonimor chapter 18 . 9/16/2012
Hmmm...dark notes in it, some action, drama, and angst...and an ending that, while open to continuation, still leaves you feeling fulfillment...all in all I give is a 9 out of 10.
loool99 chapter 9 . 9/4/2012
AMAZING! Jaw dropping good ol ben tennyson goodness :D I praise you for your spectaculer work!
doc boy chapter 18 . 7/13/2012
Well I do think there's something missing. You said there's gonna be bwen in the end and it's gonna rise up like wild fire. Is this the end of the story or there's more? You can't just leave it like this. I also don't llike the fact that Ben left and gave up his dream to be a dooctor and all that. I reallly don't think an open ending is the right one in the case. If it's not the end then I hope the real ending would be a more happy one
PS: I really did have a suspecion that Ben will try to rape her. I figured it would reach a point where he couldn't take it and hold it in anymore
The Cretin chapter 19 . 6/29/2012
Dude, I live to encourage. I meant what I said. Yer one of the best in this fandom. Don't sale yourself short. You've proven you can do multiple genres, you made me laugh, you've had me wondering on the edge of my seat,etc. You've done it all. Your stories are an escape for me. I've read just about all the pairings for this fandom. Bwens and Benlies are my preferred. (The Benlie writers do write some good ones, Hell they write Julie better than the show does.) I've read good fics on all the pairings. As I said though, the Bwen ones stand out to me. I've joined the site so any time you want to P.M. me for advice or if you just want to blow some steam. I'll tell ya some details about my 2 friends I mentioned if you want. Maybe it'll give you some ideas. I can't wait to take another trip through that amazing themepark that is your imagination. Peace. Keep rockin
bowow0708 chapter 19 . 6/29/2012
Hm, I'm not sure whether to review on this or not, but I'll do it anyway.

I can't say that I'm surprised that I'm not on this list. My reviews are not what they used to be. I guess I'm more timid since that had happened, and I don't want something like it to happen again. I could quote my fic. "He will be treading on eggshells from now on." Because it kinda feels like that when I try to review. I'm so careful nowadays.
bennet001 chapter 19 . 6/29/2012
Wow I am happy and honored to be mentioned in a fic don't really know how to take the last part but I'm an optimists so I will take thumb with a smile and middle with a snicker thanks! Also i felt emotional when you used my catch phrase oh wow I just realized I have a catch phrase.:)
I have always said my review hold nothing back and they are always the truth I have read and reciewed each and everyone of this stories chapters both individually and as a whole I have not put up one review that I regret and to those authors who read this story and check the reviews don't be jealin I am reading your fics just can't make much progress. Chow Bennet out.
starmaker12 chapter 19 . 6/29/2012
Lol thank you for saying that I always try to always to get to the point but anyways can't wait to get the link for the final chapter in e-mail box can't for a awesome finish to a awesome story I hope to see more stories from ya

Sincerely starmaker 12
Long live mj 1958-2009
lordsesshomaru2 chapter 18 . 6/22/2012
The quick update was unexpected, as was the Sandra's reaction to Ben's revelation. You'd think that he revealed that he eats children for food. I liked that you wrote that despite Ben wanting her to be with him, he wants Gwen to come to him on her terms, when she is ready. It was also nice how Ben's mother realized her error and apologized, in a way. I'm not sure what to say about that final bit of the authors note; unless you're hinting that its either charmcaster, gwen, or maybe verdona; but that's only if she's in her anodite form. Who(or what)ever it is, I look forward to finding out.
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