|Reviews for What a Web We Weave|
| Maggi Esk chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
I was searching about the Adam part and then comes this story which is awesome this would had been so much better. just please dont make Mr.C and Idiot here too.
waiting for more..
| NotAContrivance chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
I like this story. I think a lot of the dialogue is really spot-on, though I do feel like the script format, though useful, detracts from the story since you lose all the nuances you get with normal prose writing. Though, again, I start out with most of my dialogue in a sort of script-like format, so I can definitely sympathize with you on not wanting to fill it all in. Anyway, good job. I actually think that, in most ways, this is a better and more complex way of dealing with it than on the show, especially in regards to Andrew and Juliet's feelings of guilt. I especially like the bit about the therapist because it rather surprised me that they never even mentioned therapy as a way of helping her, which seems rather remiss, especially given how Andrew brought it up right away when they were having family issues.