|Reviews for Outlet|
| starsNflowers chapter 11 . 8/24/2013
I read the first 8 chapters in GE and looked you up here. I am glad I did because i adore this story!
Despite Ginny's POV that she did what she did for Harry's sake, I couldn't help but smile evilly at how Hermione confronted her about her deceit. No tantrums or screming... Classy bitchiness! Great writing there!
| madam-may chapter 2 . 12/15/2012
I'm in love with this!
| shugokage chapter 11 . 9/29/2012
Amazing and beautiful story great job and good luck on future works!
| aureliasilver chapter 11 . 8/27/2012
I just read your story. I saw your comments in the last chapters that you had a lot of negative reviews on the initial ending (ie sans epilogue). So I guess I'm one of the few who actually thought it was sweet - angsty, but happy and tear jerking at the same time.
| Lance Corporal Avocado chapter 11 . 8/8/2012
Your story has been dramatic and touching. You write amazingly natural dialog.
"The beginning is a little repetitive, I know, but I just wanted to show you guys exactly how Hermione felt about everything." (From Chapter 9's note.)
This was a good call. The way you used the perspective swaps and flashbacks throughout the story was great.
"Mrs. Weasley is fretting over the food—did she make enough! Ron is grumbling about the rain clouds—we aren't really going to be sitting in the bloody rain, are we!
My grandmother asked me if I was sure I got a big enough dress—it's looking a little tight, dear, particularly in the middle..? No I'm not pregnant, Grandma, I just have a slight belly. Thanks for reminding me.
I know Harry has been harassed as well. I know he and Ron have physically thrown out at least two guests that have made comments about his bland bride."
This part was just fun to read :).
Thank you so much for writing this.
| HarryHermioneEdwardBella chapter 11 . 8/4/2012
| alix33 chapter 2 . 7/13/2012
I had to Google what a "birthday cake shot" was, since I do not drink alcohol.
"I hope your mum washed that afghan she gave you a couple of days ago before she gave it to you.. If not, I'd advise you to." Luna knocked over her drink, Ron choked on his beer, and Amber's mouth dropped. She recovered quickly. "No you didn't. Stop acting like an ass." Amber said in a steely tone. I reach in my pocket and threw down my prize for the night as evidence. "Yes, I did. I don't want you. I don't want any other girl. The only reason I'm not with the girl I actually want…well that's all fucked up too. And frankly, none of your business," I add," - Jeez Amber, buy a clue already, won't you?
| alix33 chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
"It was common for him to pour over Harry's map of Hogwarts and stare longingly at a dot labeled Luna Lovegood" - "pore over Harry's map".
| quillbee05 chapter 11 . 7/13/2012
| ultimateform14 chapter 11 . 7/13/2012
Perfect. The message is even the same as the morale of the original story. Absolutely everything here, plausible and possible and believable. Fantastic ending. Fantastic. Have yourself a round of applause!
| Pyro-Neko-Isis chapter 11 . 7/13/2012
Yea! Very good! I think you ended it well
| pebbles875 chapter 3 . 7/11/2012
| foxy lady in black chapter 9 . 7/6/2012
wow! one of the best harmony fanfics ever ! a real tear-jerker ...
| badkidoh chapter 10 . 6/24/2012
well I like it .
| ultimateform14 chapter 10 . 6/22/2012
You have to write just ONE MORE CHAPTER! One more to finish it off happier! This has been such an excellent read (including the last chapter)! I love a good Harry/Hermione, and you've got a really rare talent for this. One more? Not necessarily a long one, but a happy one!