|Reviews for fresh pair of eyes|
| Save the Date chapter 1 . 8/7
I love this XD
| soul-of-insanity chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
As the title suggested it was a fresh perspective indeed. I was simple, to the point and certainly a scene that can be imagined during a war. Victus's character was spot on and the Garrus-Shepard interaction melted my heart into goo. GReat job.
| Axelkin chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
Very well done. Liked the view from Victus a lot. It gives a completely different view into Garrus and Shepard's relationship. Good job!
| Renn chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
Really nice piece. I love Victus, so I was glad to find it, plus it was really a good read, you described thing in a way that allowed to see through his eyes, and I really felt for him. :) Thanks for sharing!
| Viking Eggplant chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
I really liked this perspective on the Shepard/Garrus relationship! Primarch Victus was such cool character ).
| Thanatos34 chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
This is a very well-written story, and again, an original idea. It's interesting to look at Garrus and Shepard's relationship through Victus' eyes, and you did it perfectly, to boot.
Thanks for the read!
| Shootingstar7123 chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
This was really good. The comfortable companionship between Shepard and Garrus, the Primarch's complete discomfort with their situation... It all came together perfectly. I really enjoyed this story!
| Vertin chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
I really liked it. You caught really well the way they are comfortable with each other and the care they show for each other.
The thing with Victus as a POV character was interesting too.
| Typing Jayla chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
I have to agree with Gentle Breezes, this has been written amazingly. You caught the characters spot on and its such a breather to have something read in someone else's perspective.
| Gentle Breezes chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
Man, this was a GOOD READ. Usually Garrus/Shepard things are done from either of their points of view, or from the point of view of the crew, but it's interesting to see how an outsider (and a Primarch, no less) handles their relationship.
You described the feeling of the characters very well. I could see everything happening in my mind, feel my stomach twist up every time the Primarch's does. You wrote this very well, and I enjoyed ever bit of it. Keep up the awesome writing!