|Reviews for Coming to Terms|
| Jaki822 chapter 26 . 2/11
dude, i love your Whealjack, but i hate the cliffhanger you made
| MissMary chapter 26 . 2/9
Nice little cliffie there! I did love how you described Wheeljack and his mindset
| Starfire201 chapter 26 . 2/9
Hmm, guess I spoke too soon about the amusement beginning again. Raises a few questions, no doubt about it.
| Starfire201 chapter 25 . 2/5
So the Autobots are finally getting proactive. I look forward both to seeing the looks on the faces of the 'Cons when the 'Bots start trying to play their own game as well as seeing if it backfires on the 'Bots in anyway. Let the amusement begin again. :)
| Moonscream chapter 25 . 1/31
This line made my day ""Uh…" The Comm. Officer looked up into thin air, where all facts were stored." XD XD XD
| Besseria chapter 25 . 2/1
Wheeljack's SCIENCE! bubble cracked me up. XD
| silberstreif chapter 25 . 1/20
So, the Autobots are finally taking the initiative and do that in a way that is probably not one the Decepticons expected. :D I nearly pity the two Constructicons, they're now in the very middle between this conflict...
| Jaki822 chapter 25 . 1/20
if i could i would send you six bucks in the mail so that you could update sooner...because i don't have paypal or use a credit card
haha Prowl and Jazz had to be sent to the corner for a time out lol
why does prowl keep looking over at jazz for?
wait is there a Jazz and Prowl thing going on? ? ?
Whealjacks science bubble was awesome, not one wants to be inside its radius in case they get caught in the explosion
i can't see Red Alert, Ironhide, or Prowl being courted at all...or Sunsteaker. and Cliffjumper and Tracks and Brawn
But i can see Hound being case by multiple Decpitcons at once
| Happerry chapter 25 . 1/19
Yay! An update! And the Autobots are about to show the Decepticons it takes two to tango, it seems..
| fancyspinner chapter 6 . 12/15/2013
Thi is actually a very interesting story. The idea of a true peace with two groups that have diverged so much in quite interesting.
How much will they have to learn? Can they?
They're so different.
You r putting great questions out there? Its kind of like marrages of state wherein the couples have no clue how to act and where tostep.
| fancyspinner chapter 3 . 12/15/2013
too funny. Poor megsy and optimus no more fun times. giggle
| fancyspinner chapter 2 . 12/15/2013
The hottest thing in the history of ever! hahahahahah! Woot! (grin)
Jaz is too cute. I do wonder if everyone will be getting inover their helms cons and bots alike.
| StarCaptain299 chapter 24 . 11/22/2013
It is so true! People automatically blame the victim and don't condemn the criminal.
Your story is putting me through highs and lows like you wouldn't believe! I have read some amazing stories over the years, but I have NEVER read anything like this before. I didn't even know you could DO that with words. It's as if story-telling is your super-power or something! You have such an amazing gift. I can almost believe that you can bring down dictatorships and raise a new World Order with the power of your words, if you put your mind to it :D
Many sincere thanks for continuing this work of literary art, with a special thanks to Wyvern as well.
Best of luck & sincere regards,
| ennui deMorte chapter 24 . 11/11/2013
Brilliant chapter! So sad, hearing all those different ways that victims are blamed - I love how you integrated them in so seamlessly into this story.
| RangerBlack chapter 24 . 11/9/2013
I have never before read a story that hits so hard in the heart and mind as this one. Every chapter brings to light a social viewpoint that urges readers to participate in the dissection of longstanding beliefs; things we've said, things we've felt, things we think we understand but never really questioned, and things we've wanted to talk about and didn't know how. I've found myself lately stopping a passing thought and wondering where that sort of logic came from. This story is not only amazingly well written it is astoundingly deep in all that it tackles. When you begin addressing something through the characters you not only allow the readers to follow the issue, but reach the end at the same point. I feel I walk away after each chapter understanding parts of myself and others better than before, for better and for worse, but as this chapter showed, in the hopes of the better. Thank you. And thanks to the lovely soul who commissioned this and allowed others to enjoy it as well.