Reviews for The Apprentice
Himawari Mii chapter 1 . 2/21/2014
Of course SHE would be a sadist.. Heh. 3
"Satan, homosexual, penis." Oh, Silver... X3 nice one!

Wait, wut? Gold's the lord(or something) of Lyra and SILVER!?

That awkward moment when the couple is in an EXTREMELY embarrassing position, and then the pervert walks in. OMFGAWKMHJIKHKGORDKVNVFSKDNDKSDFKSEWLEOAAAAAGGGHHH! X3

WHAT HAPPENED IN IRELAND?
Matchmakingdove1028 chapter 3 . 2/7/2014
NOOOOOOOOO! PLS CONINUE THIS! I BEG YOU!1 PLZ! DO NOT PUT THIS DOWN!1! I WILL CRY IF U DO! uhuhu... *cries in emo corner*
DoubleD333 chapter 3 . 1/6/2014
It was good while it lasted.
An0nym0us-Writer chapter 3 . 9/28/2013
Awwww...
OC-FREE Dinosaur chapter 3 . 9/2/2013
Kaith... KAITH... KAITH...!
...
KAITH!
I HAVE MISTY'S MALLET AND I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN. O_O
GO AND UPDATE.
NOW.
*snatches mallet from Misty*
DUDE.
I'M A CRAZY SOULSILVERSHIPPER.
YOU BETTER UPDATE.
I NEED AN UPDATE!
...
rawr.

OC-FREE DINO OUTTA HERE!
Dia Newman chapter 3 . 7/16/2013
:P Ooooh well! This was good, non the less! I'll go read the actual fiction :P
LittleSpringroll chapter 3 . 7/12/2013
Yes, get it published! It's really good so far. If you can get it published, I'd like to know when it comes out.
OnlyNeeded151 chapter 2 . 6/10/2013
I love this story more than anything, please, please, please, update! This seems nothing like an actual fiction to me, I don't see how someone could think it is one. Please update!
OnlyNeeded151 chapter 3 . 5/12/2013
NOOOO DON'T TAKE THIS STORY DOWN PLEASE NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I WANT THIS STORY TO BE HERE AND BE UPDATED PLEASE DON'T REMOVE IT!
Lingerer chapter 3 . 3/9/2013
If any case, please update this!
But of course, this is all your choice.
Otakuchips chapter 3 . 12/28/2012
Nooo! What? But... I was just... Why? ( i _ i )I liked it when Silver was a character... With Lyra... Fine. Tell me when it gets published. I'll buy it. But I'm going to use my imagination to make the character into Silver ()ゞ
Otakuchips chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
Mistake: I shouldered and bag pocketed the coin purse. "So…how's everyone else doing?"
Correction: I shouldered the bag and pocketed the coin purse...
Not to be critical or anything just to let you know. :)
Mom Stalks You chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
Hmmmmmmm... 'impersonation of a nun' you got that from pirates of the Caribbean didnt ya? XD thats damn funny though I'm trying to imagine silver in a nun getup
TigerSneak1 chapter 3 . 11/4/2012
A bit late, as I keep forgetting, but I wish you luck! I really hope that you get your story published! I notice you say it is very likely it will not receive future updates. If it does get published, does that mean this story is automatically on permanent hiatus? Or is it still have the chance of getting updated? I know it's kind of pointless, but this is a really good story. I can see only one reason why you wouldn't do both, but the author is king. Best fortune!
SilverSpecterSwirl chapter 3 . 10/19/2012
Awww... and I really liked this story... Ohh well... :/
I hope you accomplish you book publishing!
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