|Reviews for Gargoyles: Breaking the Rules|
| Fan Boy 101 chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
Pretty good so far. Keep up the good work.
| BlazeStryker chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
I think the story's nice, but there's a slight problem with the premise.
Oberon's laws only concern his Children and other residents of Avalon. If he banned interRacial mating on the Island, that would matter to the Avalon Clan, Princess Katherine, and Tom, but Gargoyles not ON the Island in the Mists simply aren't affected or covered by this edict.'
For that matter, Oberon hasn't repudiated matings between the Third and Second races off the Island, or he would have attacked Fox (daughter of Titania) and her son Alex.
(The First race is the Gargoyles, the Second Race is Man, and Oberon and his Children are the Third.)
| Trich chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
Sounds like a nice start, pls continue )