|Reviews for Wrong|
| Rosawyn chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
Ah, this is really lovely. :) I absolutely love the list of examples showing just how Jack is wrong. They are wonderful.
I think my favourite is "looks like roast beef and tastes like cherries," because I sort of know what that is like - it's like those Jelly Belly candies that look like small jelly beans and taste like butter toast. And the texture of those is totally off too. So it's very wrong.
But also, I just love the idea of Jack looking like roast beef, because he kinda does! XD lol He even calls himself "beefcake" once, so there's also that. And tasting like cherries? Well, maybe not, but I bet he tastes like something nice! _ lol
| rabeckab chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
Hi. Just sort of stumbled onto your site and saw your request for suggestions. I'm a tech writer, so I'm used to paring down words. How does this work for you? (100 words)
He was Wrong. The way two plus two equals nineteen is wrong. The way a cell phone in 1774 is wrong. He was nails on a chalkboard, constant barking, fire alarm shrieking, looks like roast beef and tastes like cherries, don't look now a goldfish is flying a bicycle, space station on the very edge of a black hole and just sitting there WRONG. And it was Rose's fault. Which means it's my fault. My TARDIS, my Companion, my fault. All my fault. And there's nothing I can do about it.
And there's no way to fix it.
(Oh, and I liked this BTW. I wouldn't have bothered playing with it otherwise g.)