Reviews for Teenage Dirtbag
bshdhs chapter 3 . 2/18
Morrrrrrrre
lycanthrope21 chapter 3 . 6/14/2009
Write more soon!
lycanthrope21 chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
I thought it was really good, but could I just suggest one thing? You might want to put a break or something (like * or something) between when you switch from Lindsay/hot guy to Nick to Sam/Bill/Neil, only because it can sometimes get confusing on who's talking. But I really liked how you did it pretty much all in dialogue, because it makes it interesting and you don't see that that often. You'd think that's be confusing, but the way you do it, the reader catches on quickly and it's really good. I'm rambling, but it was good :)
Revertigo chapter 3 . 2/27/2009
Please update! I wanna know what happens next! Please! :)
recluse chick chapter 3 . 6/6/2007
i really like your story i hope you continue it
XxX Little Miss Vixen XxX chapter 3 . 5/31/2006
Sweet Sweet Sweet Sweet Effing Sweet! I am in love with this story. Okay, so I don't love it that much but it's definitely a favorite!
XxX Little Miss Vixen XxX chapter 2 . 5/31/2006
Swet. :] Another great chapter.
XxX Little Miss Vixen XxX chapter 1 . 5/31/2006
Wow. That was amazing. So amazing. That was so fucking amazing. I loved it. I want to read it again and again and again and - well, you get the idea. *adds to favorites*.
knisha chapter 3 . 9/20/2005
The part with Bill was amusing.

The jumping back and forth from first to third person was a little weird, but it was written well enough to keep me interested in the side plots.

How does this story end?
vernie chapter 3 . 1/23/2004
I suppose there's no hope in you updating this story huh? I can't tell you how much I LOVE it. Everyone's in character and the storyline is excellent. I also love the fact you menitoned Led Zeppelin

It is by far one of the best fics I've read here so far-I can't praise it enough. If you read this review, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE do consider updating. PLEASE?
vernie chapter 3 . 1/23/2004
I suppose there's no hope in you updating this story huh? I can't tell you how much I LOVE it. Everyone's in character and the storyline is excellent. I also love the fact you menitoned Led Zeppelin

It is by far one of the best fics I've read here so far-I can't praise it enough. If you read this review, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE do consider updating. PLEASE?
Americangirl chapter 3 . 2/16/2003
I liked this story alot. I miss FAG being on tv and fanfic helps to fill the void. Do you think you'll add more?
Lisa chapter 3 . 8/9/2002
Not bad, although there are many inconsistencies: i.e. I dont believe that clubbing existed in 1980, nor did the song "Teenage Dirtbag"...Plus, Bill doesn exactly have a Dad, at least not one who would sit with him and help him figure out girls...and his Mom may be a little slow, but she is not so stupid to help him pick out the right cheese for his date. I always figured that she is a young mother, and therfore not so out of touch...
Piper chapter 3 . 7/25/2002
Not bad, but you've got a few anachronisms in there. The show takes place in the year 1981, and they're listening to CDs? Also, Harold would be the one who doesn't know who Fonzie is, not Sam. "Happy Days" was still running in 1981. Otherwise, not bad.
spemhabemus chapter 3 . 6/13/2002
I love how Jean is getting into the whole "feminism" thing...I wonder what her reaction will be.

You don't use speech tags a lot ("said"), but it's so easy to be able to tell who's talking because the dialogue is so in character...good job! I'm sure I'll be hearing more of the adventures of the Weirs and their acquaintances soon.
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