Reviews for Even the Stars
Serendipity989 chapter 20 . 7/5
Okay, I'm stopping halfway through this chapter just to tell you that you effing suck. (Later I'll apologize but right now, you suck.)
Don't think I didn't see that DW reference! Idk if you mentioned it as an AN at the end if the chair but damn!


In fact I think I stopped to review right after that sentence. O.o woops. I'll um... Just you know... Go finish the chapter...
BlueMoonChaos chapter 6 . 4/13
Thought JT would be angrier and more wild. He is described in every story about Tarsus IV (well...almost every one) as being like a rabid animal focused solely on survival and protecting his kids. Afterward Tarsus, he is closed off, distrustful of everyone, and angry. Kinda different from the JT you describe in this chapter. Don't know how I feel about this one, still more used of (and in some agreement with) the other version(s) of JT I've read about...
aFanofYours chapter 29 . 10/26/2014
I really hate endings... haha Oh well, I can't keep reading forever.
On a more serious note, I feel that it's only logical*snickers* that I express my deepest and most not-humiliating love for your works. :) You have made me laugh, scream and cry. Mostly just crying...
I'm a man, what can I say. haha
I have yet to read your sequel, but trust me when I say this, I will read it. And you will probably get another review like this soon. Who doesn't love reviews? Seriously :D
Did I mention I also hate sequel endings? *sigh*
You are awesome!
delete-account-please 5237847 chapter 29 . 9/3/2014
Fantastic story really liked it off too read The One .
Sovereign Violette chapter 29 . 7/3/2014
This has to be one of the greatest stories I have ever read. The drama, the action, the suspense, the love, the humor... it was all so rich, to endearing-I almost didn't make it to bed last night because I was so enthralled by your story; I wanted nothing more than to continue reading it until the end.

I wanted to cry at some points, beat people up at others... I wanted to hug the life out of people and I most CERTAINLY laughed like a giddy fan girl.

This is very well written. Please be proud of your work! I know I am.
CA chapter 29 . 3/28/2014
I am very (very) glad that you didn't kill Jim off and I loved the story. There is however something you should consider editing. The 'child fingers' line. While I understand that you must have meant 'chilled' the unintentional pedophilia is probably something you want to, ah, excise.
Mari Wollsch chapter 29 . 3/6/2014
great xxxxxxx
missBAMF chapter 29 . 1/29/2014
read this all in about two days. It was very endearing and I loved the originality with the plot. It wasn't predictable at all and I don't get to read much of those around here! Just one more fic to add to my list of all time faves! Now...give me one in this same universe where Kirk has to save a hurt!Spock? While I love hurt!Jim...there is nothing I love more than a protective!Kirk haha. Thanks again for the awesome story!
gummibear chapter 20 . 12/19/2013
You like cliffies don't you. Kept me on edge this whole time. Love the story though
Madd Madds chapter 29 . 11/13/2013
sherlocked chapter 29 . 11/12/2013
Oh my god. I hate you, and i love you. No, i hate you so very much! This was so beautifully written ok. I was reading this from 1am to 3am, and continued from 1pm all the way to 6pm ths next cannot express how wonderfully awesome this was. You plot twists are to die for. Literally. You portray everything so detailed and emotional, that i cant even begin to describe. All in all, great job with this. Hell, great is an understatement.
tydeerose chapter 29 . 11/6/2013
Loveeeeeeee it! Off to read the sequel! !
loki chapter 19 . 11/5/2013
Im so confused omg
delete-account-please 5149757 chapter 29 . 11/3/2013
Pretty excellent story off to read The One.
ticklethedragon1 chapter 16 . 10/26/2013
Okay, so I'm not even sure if you're checking these reviews anymore. But seriously, I've spent the last hour or so crying over this stupid fanfiction. It doesn't help that I have Philip Glass's 'Metamorphosis' playing in the background. I clicked on this thinking it would be just another cute de-aged fic. Now I'm even more emotionally unstable than before and way too involved in a way too wonderful story. Because someone with a writing talent such as this should not be able to team up with such an incredibly angsty plot. It just shouldn't happen. Because you know what happens when it does? Tears and sadness and a need for ice-cream, that's what. Dammit man, you can't just write something as incredible as this and then expect me to be okay with it! Life doesn't work that way. Instead, I have to sit here reading as the bloody characters dig themselves in to such a deep hole of H/C that I don't even know how they'll come out of it. And because I'm masochistic, I keep clicking 'next' to this wonderfully fantabulous horrific terrible story.

Basically, I'm just here to say that I love this. Thank you.
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