|Reviews for War and Peace|
| Shian1998 chapter 1 . 8/24
Fantastic one-shot! Very well written, and they're both perfectly in character. Felt very sorry for both Gustave and Lisette. The only flaw I noticed was when you said that his bayonet was out of bullets, which is not possible as a bayonet is not a gun. A bayonet is a knife, sword, or spike-shaped weapon designed to fit in, on, over or underneath the muzzle of a rifle, musket or similar weapon, doubling the weapon as a spear. Despite that, great story! Great job!
| Skarlette Fox-Stoddard chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
| MauserGirl chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
I'm sorry to say that you've lost me right at the beginning when you said his bayonet was out of bullets. XD It's physically impossible for a bayonet to be "out of bullets", being that it's not any kind of firearm.
I dunno ... I thought it was well-written from a writing point-of-view, but that it was badly researched from a history point-of-view.
| kioshi chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
i LOVE your story :)