update soon

Like it but Mizu no Rei would be Spirit of the Mists. For ghost it would be youkai or yourei.

Eagerly awaiting the next update.

harem and mei should be part of it

Yo! haha remember me? im glad to see that your continuing the story haha especially since i aways thought that we came up with a rather unique plot XD! so gd luk, can't wait for the next chap and im still free to act as a sounding board if you want.

P.S haha i was thinking, that maybe naruto could learn that camoflage jutsu that the iwa nins used in the kakashi gaiden, and really be a ghost even when ppl spot him frm the start XD haha bt its your story now, so its your choice XD

Great start to the story! It is interesting how you have Naruto being against Konoha, and I can't wait to see how that plays out. I am also interested when Naruto meets his uncle again, if you are going to have them meet... Please update soon so I can see what happens next!

Awesome, have Kushina and her daughter be in the harem.

good story

Interesting idea i really can't wait for more

I'm glad this story is back up and running even in a renewed version of it or rewrite if you will thanks for getting back to this story I enjoyed the first one a lot I can't wait to read more of this in the future ja for now

I love you story

Now THAT'S a start! I liked the original's start... but this, as you noted in your notice on the original, does contain more details and for that... good sir, thank you!

this is awsome! keep it up

Awesome good first chapterI like it

FINALLY! I have been waiting for this bro! Good luck and God speed to ya... as long as hinata or sakura are NOT in the pairing.

awesome