|Reviews for Pixels in the Night|
| Moi chapter 13 . 2/23
This is one of the most engaging and brilliantly written stories I have come across so far. And believe me, I've been reading loads, albeit not that many in the Criminal Minds and Person of Interest section(s). It has suspense in spades, is funny, well thought out and not just gets the characters spot on, but makes them, their interactions and dialogues come to life extremely well!
Please continue this story!
One of the funniest bits you just came back to: the neutered male beagle named Reese parts and Reese's reaction to it when he first spoke to Garcia referring to him and his furry little face! It's what makes PoI so . . . I don't know . . . sweet, the fine sense of humor you can find there, all of Reese's different smiles included. This kind of humor really is a rare thing on TV and you managed to capture that beautifully. And that's not even getting to the CM elements of the story!
The maneuvering both Finch and Garcia are doing in detail is something we don't get to see this explicitly on the telly. However, in written form it has a fascination all of its own, outlining both their characters and their past and present so very in depth.
Amazing. Truly amazing, there is no other word for!
| IceWing chapter 13 . 1/29
Good story... and yet, I want more...
| idadri chapter 13 . 10/5/2014
it was very pleasant.
i love it!
| addicted2text chapter 13 . 8/30/2014
I sincerely hope that as it has been some time since March that your move has gone smoothly and there will be updates to this fic forthcoming. While not my usual fare I have enjoyed seeing a different side to Harold_$BIRDNAME_OR_ANALOG than we usually see in the show. Granted this fic discounts his lover the artist, but that relationship was more or less shuttered anyway.
Garcia was always the character I enjoyed best on Criminal Minds when I watched, but I quit after the show kept getting more and more outlandish. It was just harder and harder to swallow some of the more senseless murder-porn scenarios that made no sense whatsoever and the writers didn't even try to shine a light on motivations or framework-just relying in "well they're insane" to explain away story lines. The trouble with fiction is in having to show your work; real life can be as strange as it has to be but fiction has to make sense. The writers weren't (IMHO) even trying to do so.
Still it was nice seeing the good side of the show again through your fic. I hope to see more of that in the future, so I'm adding you to my C2 group.
| Silvermoon of Forestclan chapter 13 . 7/14/2014
I like it!
Do you think you'll ever finish?
| megcaruthers chapter 13 . 4/5/2014
Love the story so far. When are you going to finish it? Can't wait. I don't know how you keep all these people so in character, but you've done an amazing job.
| Colgate Cavity Protection chapter 13 . 3/11/2014
| Avarianna chapter 13 . 2/12/2014
nooooooooooo evil! evil! you horrible cliffhanging writer who abandoned their story
| HecatonchiresLM chapter 13 . 1/2/2014
Enjoyed so far. Abandoned?
| rigger42 chapter 13 . 12/28/2013
This is so compelling and original and I'm so, so sad to see it end here. I sincerely hope you will one day return to this universe and show us how it all turns out. I can't imagine Pen leaving her family but I would hope that there could be some kind of spark or resolution with Harold. And I'd love to know if she tosses her faith behind egedn and wipes Reese from the files, or if her team ends up - accidentally or intentionally - betraying him to Donnelly.
| nas2439 chapter 13 . 11/21/2013
I know a long shot but hope you update again
| Darrak chapter 13 . 7/18/2013
I hope you're planning on finishing it someday ..
| Hisuiko chapter 2 . 7/18/2013
Wow - wonderful story, I read it through last night whilst trying to fall asleep in this silly heatwave, and enjoyed it thoroughly.
I do hope that you will be returning to it when you are able to :)
Hugs Hissy x
| extracutegurl9 chapter 13 . 5/22/2013
Well. That is interesting.
| extracutegurl9 chapter 7 . 5/21/2013
Wow. Make Kev unfaithful so Garcia can dump him and hang out with Finch? You do realize that you could have found a legitimate, in character reason for them to break up, right? Why do you take the easy road and smear the good character of, for lack of a better phrase, a good character?
Other than that, good story.