|Reviews for Schooled ALTERNATE ENDING|
| Dolphindreamer chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
LOVE IT! The ending of this chapter rocks and there is so so much potential here for crazy crap to happen! Whoot! *sigh* I love your writing!
| The Silver Dragon Master chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
if this is the alternate I can't wait till the original as this was a great part. I espesially liked to see how Hadrian worked out what the items were and what the Wand would look like, you don't see it to often in stories like this. As it is mostly published authors that are consered with how a conclution came to be and what things look like. I do think some of this can be worked into the main story but it depends on what way you want the story to go.
| Krysania chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
Thank you for posting... I really enjoyied the way they shared the wand and in the end the hallows...
PS when you can I will much apreciate a cutting tongue curce at James' way...
| Lovefremione chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
A simply brilliant ending, however, I am glad that you chose to persue a longer writing in this arc.
I cannot wait to see how you continue.
| Barranca chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
Do James and Dumbledore realise they have gloriously messed up? I bet they do. Will they stop their impotent scheming to discredit and tear down Hadrian? For some reason I find it hard to believe. Nice show!
| Haltia chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
This is a very interesting and a sequel-worthy ending for the story. I really hope we see this (or a variation of this) in the Schooled at some point -loves-
| Sweet Pea chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
Dude I think that this should be the real chappie 9 and you just continue the fic from there. This was so good that I really want you to continue it now.
In whatever you decide, may the muses be with you.
| Janelly Slytherin chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
*gasp of delight* absolutely brilliant. *squeal* i love this ending.
| Haine chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
Oh, brilliant. It's absolutely brilliant. For some reason, i have never wanted Tom or Voldemort be the Master of Death. Maybe it because of their power-hungry nature, they would fight to be the Hallow's master against Harry, not sharing like this.
And, for this brilliant idea, i must say i love it. Absolutely, totally love it. Have i said i love you? Oh yes, i love you and your genius mind.
| scotsremusfan chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
| sousie chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
hehehe that was good but i must say i hoped dumbeldore defeat would have been more spectacular and more slythering
| Tommy14 chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
I am so glad you agreed to post this as an alt. It's absolutely brilliant. I'm in awe of your imagination and cleverness. I'm going to go back and read it again.
| Neko-chan -Silvered Tongue chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
... This was fantastic! Omg, I can't wait to see what you'll be doing along these lines in Schooled *cackles* Sooo much revenge - eventually. *0*
| peniqudeplata chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
WOW! You leave me speechless.
| dogsby chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
Great ending, but I would clamor for a "Sequel". I would want them to find out what Albus did to block Tom and Harry and have Harry get his inheritance and toss the Potters out and Albus out of the Castle and find out what would be in Neville's negotiations of Marriage for Harry.