|Reviews for the toa of planet earth|
| Alex chapter 6 . 11/9/2012
I really like this story. :) I do think you need, and please take this nicely, to double check your chapters for grammar issues like loss of punctuation and/or flipping between First person and Third. Other then that I think this will be one of my favorite stories on here.
| Ballazan chapter 6 . 10/23/2012
Hey Niko try and look at mine
| cheong.yewfong chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
Hmmm it would be better understood by the readers if you would add some comas and punctuation mark. Aside from that, you might need some more juice to fill your first chapter if you would want more positive reviews. I'll be happy to help you with it!
Aside from that, great story! Looking forward for more of the content! )
| Chasm-chan chapter 5 . 7/19/2012
Great chapters! Sorry I didn't review before now, my computer wouldn't let the review go through.
| Derp chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
Excuse me kind sir, but are your period, comma, and quotation mark keys on your keyboard broken? If not, USE SPELLCHECK AND SAID KEYS!
| Species Unknown chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
I'll be blunt.
needs SERIOUS work
| Ballazan chapter 4 . 6/1/2012
Good Job Niko keep on doing the great work