Reviews for The Saviour
PeacockMermaid chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
I'm like, "Oh My Gosh!"

The way you got everything to rhyme was neat, But call me weird I loved the ending!

I could actually visualize what you were discribing, it was so...Mesmerizing!

Great job :)
ILoveSenecaCrane chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
It is so good! I love it so much! There's really no critique that I can give, it was very enjoyable, thank you so much for posting this! :D It's really well done!

Oak Leaf Ninja chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
Sad...but good job!
Vrow chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
This is incredible! I'm usually not good with poems and everything like, but this is really incredible and really got me. The poem describes the evil and pain pretty much flesh, but not as flesh it could be. This is really simple, yet can show you somethings that will serve as a hidden bait.

For the bait, it's really tasty and worthy for me. The fear in going evil really can kick a hero's confident, especially if the hero is just so young, and even more after the hero KNOWS what he could, WOULD, do if he made a little mistake.

This poem... I could see how good it can be improved, but this style has it's own flow, and this makes it go on it's own way of perfection. Not the best, but not the worst poem either.

Congratulations in this... charming poem.