|Reviews for On A Night Walk|
| WeasleySeeker chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
I liked this, haha. I love how they both snap at each other and at first it seems like Rabastan has the upper hand, then Evan, and then Rabastan again, and they both have a comeback until Evan just has to give in. I loved their attitudes - nice. :)
| Shira Lansys chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
Lol, I don't think she'll take the truth very well, Evan...
I loved the argument between the two of them. It was surprisingly hot!
| ReillyJade chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
I liked this very much. Despite the fact that I typically only play in the Trio-era, "good" side world, I've always harbored a secret love for Evan Rosier, and I have no idea why. :p
I love your characterization of him. He's so Slytherin in this: cunning, witty, and devious, yet he still has that voice in his head telling him to be loyal. And Rabastan...oh, my. What a talker, eh? :p I never read these two as a pairing, but it works somehow.
The one thing I would like to point out, though, is that the summary in your author's note kind of gives away the climax of the story. If it hadn't been right there, I think the story would have been more suspenseful, making me guess as to whether Evan would do it or not. But it's not a big deal; so many people don't even take the time to read author's notes, anyway. :p
Overall, a lovely little one-shot! Thanks for taking the challenge! :)
| Inkfire chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
I like the way you described them both… very nicely done ;)