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Ava Ayala9 chapter 1 . 7/27/2014
Sylvia

Female

Dusk Light

Russian

15

Inter galactic dimension power, Eithelieeen( a type of creature that sets fire to stuff and absorbs light to live)

? Brown silvery blonde? Silver scar shaped like a lightning bolt on her right hand

Ripped and tomboyish clothes

Avengers,X men

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Yara chapter 2 . 11/16/2013
Name: Rima Hoshina Code name : Passion. Race: Japanese. Power: Rima has the ability to sing songs that can cause illusions, influence emotions and actions, and cause those who have dark spirits to cover their ears in pain. (kind of like a siren) She can also sense dark spirits, see hidden emotions, and hidden desires. She can also have other mutants join her in order to have the song's influence stronger. Plus has a long range of combat styles. Alliance: An official X man. Discovery: The Professor discovers a new mutant in Tokyo and sends the X men to find the mutant. Nightcrawler stumbled upon a large park with everyone asleep except a girl who looked scared out of her wits. Rima introduces herself and she said that she was practicing a lulaby for her baby cousin and caused everyone to fall asleep. Nightcrawler was just supprised because this kid could do something like that. Next thing you know the Brotherhood shows up to take the kid away. Nightcrawler asks Rima to sing again and try to make that song aim at one target. She understands and sings Mermaid Melodey's song Legend of the Mermaid. The Brotherhood starts to cover their ears, but it isn't enough. So she asks him to join in and it made the song strong enough to make the Brotherhood retreat. The other X men show up and are shocked that Nightcrawler and Rima defeated the Brotherhood by themselves. Then the professor comes and asks Rima if she would like to stay with them, she says that he will have to ask her grandparents but otherwise she would like to especially if if "Onee San " was there. Age:13. Family: Her parents died in a car-crash so she lives with her grandparents. They accept the fact that she's a mutant, and embrace her gift. Relationships: She sees Nightcrawler as an older brother and constantly calls him Onee San or Kurt nee san. He is also joins in her songs the most. She sees Jean as a know-it-all and too-perfect-for-her-own-good, and sometimes joins her songs. Rouge is one of her best friends because of their opinions on Jean, and their love of horror movies/stories/poems. Rouge joins her songs just as much as her"younger brother". Shadowcat is also one of her good friends because they are both MAJOR otakus, she joins her songs just as much as Nightcrawler. Rima sees Cyclops as a good person who sometimes needs a whack on the head with a dictionary (or anything that is heavy). He joins her songs more than Jean, but less than the others. She looks up to Wolverine as if he were her hero. She doesn't let him join in becaus she believes he finds singing embarrassing. She sees the professor as a good person, and a father to many of the students. Personality: Sweet, brave, peppy, hyper, dramatic, passionate (of course), funny,told to be a total bookworm,but is highly sensitive and highly brutal. She skipped so many grades that she is a softmore in Highschool. She believes that the heart says more than the mind. Hobbies: Singing (of course), dancing, art, reading, training sessions(the truth is that she really enjoys them, and others find her really strange because of that), judo, acting, whacking Scott with a heavy object (technicly this isn't a hobby but she enjoys it). Appearance: She is slightly tall for her age,peachy skin with some hints of tan, knee-length black hair with dyed light blue highlights, pale blue eyes. Languages: Fluent in both Japanese and English.
JackoLillie chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
Didn't know if you were still accepting but I thought I would give it a bash.

he got hit by a car.

clothing : Shorts and knee high socks with light and loose tops which. Or will wear a baggy comical hoodies ie cat ears and such.

Group : Captured, Un-seen or Bandit.

Breif backgrounds: Nothing much lived in an average family with an older sister and a looked over but it didn't bother her until her parents forgot her at a park and she got hit by a to travel around, sole things to survive.

Forum for main characters:

Name: Billie Morris

Nicknames and/or code name: Ghost

Gender: Female

age: 18/19

Nationality (include accent if any): Scottish (Glasgow, but sorta posh)

Spoken languages: English, Arabic, Japanese

birthday and birth place: 6/7/1994 Glasgow

sexuality: Straight

appearance:Short Black pixie cut hair with bottom layers grew out long and tied into a single plait down her back. Hazel eyes. Average height, average build. long scar down arm when she got hit by a car.

attitude: Realist with slight negative view

Personality: Calm and chilled out but gets annoyed quite easily but usually sulks loves knowing peoples secrets but will never tell. Sometimes gets upset when people forget her but calms down quickly. Go with the flow kinda gal.

Beliefs: All are equal,

Weapons (if any, be realistic, they aren't gonna have a grenade launcher and lazer guns, also include their fighting style): doesn't fight much usually just Intel gathering but dose boxing.

skills (beside their power): Computer Hacker (only place people actually notice what she's doing)

Power:She's a phantom, she has no presence at all. Unless she speaks up no one notices her. She has no sent, people automatically overlook her, any sounds she makes are counted as background noise and usually ignored (unless she's talking/singing), she has no warmth to her skin or cold. She is nothing.

Weakness (power weakness and other weaknesses) : if someone notices her and she can't get their attention off her she's just a normal person. In a plan people usually forget she's there and she gets in their way. If's she hurt anyway its damn hard to find her.

secrets: Both her parents died in the War along with her older sister.

Allies: Anyone who wants to stop the war

Enemies: Politicians

Group (include at least two you'd prefer them to be in but I will have the final decision): Captured/Unseen/ Bandits

Position in group (ie: infirmary, weapons (teaching and making), guard and/ or look out, brute (defense, could teach the younger ones to fight), scout (goes out and collects resources). not all groups will have every one of these so choose two or give me one you come up with): Scout/ inlet gathering Computer hacking. Cook

Romantic interests : Someone strong who notices her.

History (include before the war, maybe a bit about their family and how they found the group they are in if they are in one): Before War:Nothing much lived in an average family with an older sister and a looked over but it didn't bother her until her parents forgot her at a park and she got hit by a car. Parents and sister to travel around, sole things to survive met up with group as she lead one of the members away from a dangerous situation.

good/evil/neutral: Neutral, don't give a fuck.

Views (how do they view the world as it is, what do they think of the war and how do they view mutants and/or humans): It's pointless, the Wars going to destroy the world for everyone. Mutant and humans need to get a grip and realize that they are all the same

Clothing (not just one outfit, give me a general idea dn maybe a few examples):Shorts and knee high socks with light and loose tops which. Or will wear a baggy comical hoodies ie cat ears and such.

Possessions : Only carries a flash light and batteries in a pokemon backpack, anything else she needs she picks up. Has a key on a bit of string around her neck, few people knows it's her house key.

Are you ok if I kill the character , put them in a slightly elicit scene or make minor changes to them?: Yeah do what ever you want, once I send in a character its yours to do as you please. Have fun with it.

Anything else I need to know about them?: Likes pairing people, will call out cute parings if she see's them.
Huntress chapter 2 . 6/23/2012
Name: Violet Hale

Nicknames and/or code name: Vi, Lottie, codename Rags

Gender: Female

age: 5

Nationality: White, born and raised in New York

Spoken languages: English

birthday and birth place: 6th May

sexuality: Straight

appearance: Lack of food has left her with very little in the “baby fat” department, she has a thin face with hollow cheeks and almost jagged features. Her eyes are yellow, and the brightest feature of her face, which would be softly tanned if she wasn't so utterly filthy. Her hair was neon blue at one point, but is so full of dirt and mud that it's now a sort of muddy black/brown, a tangled mess reaching her shoulders.

Attitude: Fairly negative.

Personality: Violet had a very pampered childhood, but extremely little of the bouncy girl that used to be still exists. Shy and skittish, she's incredibly quiet, and very distrustful of others, she hates to get close to anyone, for fear that they'll betray her, and she loathes physical touch. She's incredibly jumpy, the slightest thing can frighten her and cause her to bolt. She's very observant, she tends to take notice of everything around her. She tends towards the more caring members of the group, those who shout and make a lot of noise she won't even go near, let alone speak to.

Beliefs: None

Weapons: None

skills: None

Power:Absorption of kinetic energy. This gives her a forcefield like ability, two or three centimetres around her, that absorbs the energy of anything moving towards her at speed, or with a high enough temperature. She can then redirect this energy, with physical blows or simply the force, which, depending on how much she's absorbed, can throw people across the room and wipe out electrical equipment. The more energy she absorbs, the more powerful she is, and the more efficient the forcefield is, but it's more likely that she'll overload, she'll take in so much energy that her body can't cope, and she simply releases energy, destroying anything within two feet of her, until she has nothing left. Every four days or so, she has to have an hour where she gets to go all out on something as a way of draining her power, to lower the chance of an overload. A side effect of her forcefield ability is that the more power it absorbs, the more it protects her against mental abilities as well, making her immune to telepathy, empathy and illusionists. It wouldn't protect her from something like Scott's optic blasts, as they have no kinetic energy for her absorb, and it's not something she consciously controls, she isn't able to turn it on and off, it's always on.

Weakness: The more energy she absorbs, the more likely it is she'll overload, she's distrustful and shy, she can't swim very well.

Secrets: Nothing important.

Allies: Her group.

Enemies: Anyone else.

Group: The Unseen, Sewer Rats, Bandits.

Position in group: Look out/scout

Romantic interests: None

History: Born and raised in New York by her political mother and never there father, she was very much left on her own to be taken care of by the household staff, who gave her what she wanted to keep her out the way. When her abilities started to show, her eyes turned yellow and her hair turned blue, her mother was furious, demanding that “it” be taken away. Terrified, she fled before she could be stopped.

good/evil/neutral: Neutral at the moment, but more likely to be good.

Views: The world is very frightening and confusing and she doesn't understand it other than for some unknown reason she has to hide. The war is utterly beyond her, she doesn't understand at all, although she does recognise the difference between humans and mutants as them being “special” and “not special” with the ones that are special being attacked because of it, which she thinks should be the other way round.

Clothing: Somehow, inexplicably, everything and anything Violet wears gets ruined. It doesn't really matter what it is, but it won't be recognisable after she's worn it.

Possessions: When she left, she grabbed her schoolbag, which had her gym kit and waterbottle in from the morning, as well as three pencils and her maths book, which she now uses to note down anything she sees as importants.

Are you ok if I kill the character , put them in a slightly elicit scene or make minor changes to them?: Yes.

Anything else I need to know about them?: She suffers from nightmares of the night she left home.

Give me a few plot ideas that I can use with them: Her being found by a member of her group, an incident where she overloads and destroys something.

Forum for main characters:

Name: Madeline Hale

Nicknames and/or code name: Maddie

Gender: Female

age: 38

nationality: White, American

Spoken languages: English, French, Spanish.

birthday and birth place: 11th November

sexuality: Straight

appearance:Appearance: She generally keeps her shoulder length chestnut hair tied back in a high ponytail, which very much shows off her angular features and pale skin. Her eyes are blue, with an ingrained harsh look. She's 5'10, and has a slim, slender figure.

Attitude: Fairly negative, but angry negative, not sad negative.

Personality: Madeline Hale hates to lose. She really, really, really hates it when things don't go her way. While she's very good at wearing an indifferent mask, she finds it hard to keep up when things fail to go as planned, and she's not beyond firing someone, anyone, for it. Also she hates mutants. Her dislike of them was only minor at first, mostly built up by those around her, but then her daughter was a mutant, and ran away to join them, and she hates them for that, she loathes them for taking her little girl away. She's determined that they'll pay for that. She has a short fuse that can be difficult to hide when she's around others, and when it comes to her job, especially, she tends to put herself across as being enthusiastic and energetic instead of the indifference she uses elsewhere.

Beliefs: None

Weapons: Pistol

skills: Cooking, persuasion, organisation

Power: N/A

Weakness: Short temper, heights.

secrets: Her daughter, Violet is a mutant and missing.

Allies: Her political party, her many business partners.

Enemies: Mutants, political opponents.

Group: She's running for Mayor

Position in group: N/A

Romantic interests: Successful men, but they have to have manners and a flexible job.

History: Born in New York to a senator father and rich mother, she was raised to have everything and get it when she didn't. Her job exploded two years after her daughter was born and she had to leave her much of the time, leaving her to be raised by her staff who ran the house. When she found out she was a mutant, she was initially angry, and demanded she was taken away, but later regretted it, only to find out Violet had bolted when she'd been raging at the staff, the cook had let her out the kitchen door. Two months later, she divorced her husband of seven years.

good/evil/neutral: Sort of evil, but for a reason.

Views: The world as it is can't stay that way, something has to be done to show the mutants where they belong, hence the war. Humans were here first, therefore they should be in charge, and mutants are hated because they took Violet away.

Clothing: Smart clothing, either long, simple dresses, often in red or green, or black trousers and shirts. She often wears high heels to make herself taller.

Possessions: N/A, she lives in a house.

Are you ok if I kill the character , put them in a slightly elicit scene or make minor changes to them?: Yes

Anything else I need to know about them?: She's Violet's mother.

Give me a few plot ideas that I can use with them: A part in which she meets up with Violet and is horrified when she realises how mutants are really being treated or because she's changed so much and the mutants need to be destroyed for it.
pink penguins chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
forgot to say can if its ok with you can she be major thanks
pink penguins chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
that thing in the review was not suppose to happen i just pressed the wrong buttons

Name:Aria Sky

Nicknames and/or code name:Lone star

Gender:female

age:16

Nationality (include accent if any):Spanish

Spoken languages:English

birthday and birth place:June 1 Manhattan,New York

sexuality:Bi sexual likes guys a little bit more

appearance:she five foot nine she has straight dark brown hair green eyes she also has dimples

attitude :shes positive for the most part can be a little negative

Personality:Cheerful and hyper shes bitchy when you get on her bad side

Beliefs:she feels the same way the brotherhood and Magneto feel about humans

Weapons:she does boxing

skills:she Knows how to break into a locked room

Power:she can fly and can control and create fire

Weakness:water and she has breaks out in bumps when she eats nuts she also has a fear of chickens

secrets:she saw her mother and father die

Allies:the brotherhood

Enemies:she really doesnt have any

Group:could she be in the students please if not im ok with any thing

Position in group:scout or defense

Romantic interests:shes really not into anybody she just likes to flirt

History:she had a great child hood before she got her powers but after she got them and people found out they killed her parents she saw what happened and got as far away as possible she found the group shes in when she broke into where ever they were at the time

good/evil/neutral:neutral

View:she hates humans except for the ones that have mutants for children and take care of their kids she also hates the war

Clothing:she wears tee shirts with thing like girr saying a joke and shorts and for shoes she has combat boots

Possessions:she has a small backpack with three or four tee shirts and shorts and a cellphone she also has a name plate necklace on her neck

Are you ok if I kill the character , put them in a slightly elicit scene or make minor changes to them:yup im ok with

Give me a few plot ideas that I can use with them:i dont know maybe she can get captured and they have to save her or something like that
pink penguins chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
Name:

Gender:

mutant name (code name):

nationality:

age:

Power:

Appearance (include height, weight, hair color, eye color, body build and anything extra like scars, tattoos or piercings)

clothing (give me at least two examples, not necessarily outfits, just an idea of what they dress like: ie: leather or jean jackets and dark colored jeans and a shirt..etc)

Group (give me at least two you'd prefer them to be in but I will make the final decision):

Breif backgrounds (only needed for minor characters, not back round):

Forum for main characters:

birthday and birth place:

sexuality:

appearance ( include height, weight, hair color and style, skin color, eye color, body build, facial features and anything extra like scars, tattoos or piercings, or physical mutation if any, I think you get the point now):

attitude (basically the way the look at everything, are the negative all the time or perhaps very positive..etc..):

Personality:

Beliefs:

Weapons (if any, be realistic, they aren't gonna have a grenade launcher and lazer guns, also include their fighting style):

skills (beside their power):

Power:

Weakness (power weakness and other weaknesses) :

secrets:

Allies:

Enemies:

Group (include at least two you'd prefer them to be in but I will have the final decision):

Position in group (ie: infirmary, weapons (teaching and making), guard and/ or look out, brute (defense, could teach the younger ones to fight), scout (goes out and collects resources). not all groups will have every one of these so choose two or give me one you come up with):

Romantic interests (don't give me a specific person give me a type of person or an example, your character may or may not have a love relationship) :

History (include before the war, maybe a bit about their family and how they found the group they are in if they are in one):

good/evil/neutral:

Views (how do they view the world as it is, what do they think of the war and how do they view mutants and/or humans):

Clothing (not just one outfit, give me a general idea dn maybe a few examples):
Stargazer chapter 2 . 6/8/2012
Forum for main characters:

Name: Topaz Brookes.

Nicknames and/or code name: N/A

Gender: Male

age: 18

Nationality: American, originally from Los Angeles.

Spoken languages: English

birthday and birth place:Los Angeles, June 11th.

Sexuality: Straight.

Appearance: He has a lean, clearly muscular figure, weighing 134 Ibs and standing at a height of 6'1. His black hair has been shaven short, and he has amber-brown eyes, which stand out against his lightly tanned skin. He has a tattoo of flames running all the way up his right arm.

Attitude: Very destructive.

Personality: Topaz almost demands attention; no one is ever going to forget about him. Incredibly bold, he almost gives out an air of confidence. Although he might joke around a little with his friends, nobody should ever judge him on his behaviour with them, underestimate him and it'll be the last thing you ever do. He can be very hostile towards people he doesn't know, and it's plainly obvious when he doesn't like someone, he'll begin making sarcastic remarks and picking out faults about things. He wears a mask of smugness most of the time, making it impossible to know what he is thinking. He doesn't have much patience and he tends to act without thinking, a horrible combination since he also has a habit of taking charge around others.

Beliefs: None

Weapons: A small pistol, and three knives, two in his boots and one hung on a belt around his waist.

Skills: Running, climbing, cooking, karate.

Power: N/A, he's human.

Weakness: Swimming, he can swim, but he's absolutely terrified of water after a swimming trip with his “team” ended up with him getting caught in a fishing net and nearly drowning. He's also scared of nets and being trapped.

Secrets: None.

Allies: His team mates, Coral, blonde hair and green eyes, and Damien, brown hair, blue eyes.

Enemies: His sister, mutants.

Group: None.

Position in group: He's the leader of his group of mutant hunters.

Romantic interests: Flirts constantly with Coral, likes prettier and more violent girls.

History: Grew up with his sister in Los Angeles, a sports enthusiast. When his sister's mutation became evident and the first hitmen sent after her were torn to shreds by her, he made his own team to hunt mutants.

good/evil/neutral: Evil.

Views: Mutants are unnatural, and should be destroyed. The war is pointless, really, because mutants should learn their place.

Clothing: Combat clothing and boots, normally green or black.

Possessions: His weaponry, money, food and water, a change of underwear and a spare top.

Are you ok if I kill the character , put them in a slightly elicit scene or make minor changes to them?: Yes.

Give me a few plot ideas that I can use with them: Running into Katrina, hunting down other mutants.

Forum for main characters:

Name: Katrina Brookes

Nicknames and/or code name: Rina, Kat, Slash

Gender: Female

age: 18

Nationality: American, originally from Los Angeles.

Spoken languages: English.

birthday and birth place: Los Angeles, June 11th.

Sexuality: Bi-sexual, she'll flirt with anyone.

Appearance: At 5'10, she's a slim, willowy girl, with no excess fat. Her skin is deeply tanned, contrasting with violet eyes, which sparkle when the light hits them. Her hair is silver, and has been cut short, only just brushing the tops of her ears. She has metal teeth, and those at the front are sharpened into fangs. Her nails are also metal, and she has a habit of filing them into points.

Attitude: Violent.

Personality:First impressions are never what they seem with this girl. If you see an amber-eyed angel, chances are she's going to stab you in the back. If a silver haired beauty's flirting with you, don't take your eyes off her; she's after your wallet, and if she's just looking lost and confused, then you're in big trouble, because you've probably hurt one of her friends the week before and now she's out for revenge. Katrina is very, very good at getting what she wants. She loves to learn new things, no matter what the subject is, and enjoys testing them out, especially when it comes to fighting. She's absolutely ruthless and not someone anybody will forget in a hurry. Bold, outgoing, and willing to take risks, she adapts to changes quickly and easily, forever switching her fighting style and making her difficult to beat.

Beliefs: No religious beliefs.

Weapons: Her nails, she carries a knife in her right boot, and improvises with her fighting style, using and improving what works.

Skills: Cooking, running, climbing, swimming, gymnastics.

Power: Her teeth and nails are made of metal. Her mutation changed her appearance, turning her eyes violet and her hair silver. Her strength, speed, agility, sight and hearing are much improved, though not at superhuman levels.

Weakness: Electricity, her metal teeth and nails can and will act as a conductor. She's not very keen on heights.

Secrets: Her intentions when she first meets someone.

Allies: No one, she doesn't even trust her group that much.

Enemies: Mutant-haters, her brother.

Group: Sewer rats or Bandits.

Position in group: Guard and/or look out, defensive and protection.

Romantic interests: Anyone she decides is good looking.

History: Her father, Michael, is a successful businessman, her mother died when she was three. She grew up a sports enthusiast, along with her brother, Topaz. Her father is openly anti-mutant, and when her mutation became visible, disowned her, hiring hitmen to try and get rid of her. She spent eight months on her own before joining up with her group, which is known to her, and openly to those around her, as safety in numbers. She doesn't care much about them, only herself.

good/evil/neutral: Neutral.

Views (how do they view the world as it is, what do they think of the war and how do they view mutants and/or humans):

Clothing: Jeans, tight t-shirts, boots.

Possessions: Her knife, a change of clothes, three nail files, a water bottle.

Are you ok if I kill the character , put them in a slightly elicit scene or make minor changes to them?: Yes.

Anything else I need to know about them?:

Give me a few plot ideas that I can use with them: Meeting up with Topaz, fighting him, disagreements and arguments with her group.
KA chapter 2 . 5/31/2012
Christine is part of the unseen and has a deep connection with Axel. I like her to be major character. Axel treat her like a little sister and protect her from danger.
XxDarkWxX chapter 2 . 5/26/2012
Um here's mine I'd want her to be a majr charecter but You can do with what you will.

Name:Brandi Miller

Codename:Chrysanthemum(it's a flower with virtualy no sent. also caled mums or chrysanths. it means 'truth')

Gender:Female

Age:17

Nationality:Whit/Italian

Languages: English and neaarly fluent in Italian but not quite

birthday/place:March 1st Oakland California

sexuality:Straight

height:5'5"

weight:120

hair: Dark Auburn Shoulder length

Skin:light Olive

Eyes:Dark green

Body:Slim but not overly so. Made for speed not force.

Attitude: She's a realist. She dosen't see the point in seeing the good side of things or the bad, she'd rather see the whole picture. For her the glass isn't half full or empty, it's just a glass of water.

Personality:She's very sarcastic, maybe overly so. But she uses it to try and lighten the mood every now and again, other times just because she's used to it. She's lso a bit of a smart ass. And has a strange fetish for Factoids. She'll say random facts every now and then (i.e. did you know that forigeners used to think english speakers were evil? I's because we use so many S's in our langusge we sound like we're hissing...no you didn't need to kno that but I said it anway.)

Beliefs:survival of the fittest nothing more nothing less

Weapons:She uses the seeds in her pouch to create what she needs at that moment, within reason ofcourse. (poison darts, vine whip, giant tree. you never know when you might need a giant tree.} Use's tae kwhan doe and adds street fighting into it.

Skills:Can use herbs for emergancy firdt-aid not a healer though she just helps the process along.

Power:She can controll plants. Growth, change genetic information, movement.(she can make humoid plant things for instance. but only to at the most and he current time limit is one minute for each.)she's connected to the plants around her (not literaly) and can sense changes in the vibrations of the ground because of it. She tends to ignore those though because she thinks she'd get to paranoid eventually.

Weakness:Fire hams he plants alot, power cut by 1/4 at night because plants ilt in the darkness,herslef. She's gone overboard with her power onc and she dosent want it to happen again. so she holds back.

Secrets:She killed he father when she was 12. Hates the fact that she did and vowed to master he powe becuse of it.

Allies:Just her group

Enemies:Anyone who decideds to hurt her group, they may not be overly close but they're all she has left now.

Group(s): Bandits Alphas

Romantic intrest: someone who can handle her sarcasm and throw it back at her.

History:She was ten when she found her power. she ad planted an apple core in her back yard and in less then a minute there stood a tree. her parents refused to have a freak in the family so her father put her in the car and drove off. evetually them came to some dense woods. Her father told her to wait there and that he'd come back later. He never did. Two years later she saw him again, she let her anger get the best of her and he was dead at her feet withn seconds. She met her group a year later, it took awhile before she ever actually spoke more than a sentence but eventually she opened up a little to them.

Views: She thinks Humans are just scared and hopes that there's still good in them, but this hope shrinks everyday. She hates the way the orld is now and wishes that somehow she could just make it better.

Blouse, light jeans, black converse

shirt green sweatshirt jeans sneakers

shirt green shoes black jeans

Possesions:The simple Backpack combo XP But she also keeps the ring her father gave her on her ffth birthday. she keps it on a chain around her neck.

You can do whatever ou want with her, kill her off steal her 'V' card I dont care...but if she dies please dont make it lame-

Plot Ideas:well, she knows a lot about poisons, it'd be pretty easy to fake her own death, or someone elses.

I really hope I did a good job with this. XD
wericdream chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
Forum for main characters:

Name: Cinder Hail

Nicknames and/or code name: Foxfire

Gender: Female

age: 13

Nationality (include accent if any): White, born and raised in the U.S, a bit of a Cajun accent when extremely angry due to living in the bayous for a time as a younger child

Spoken languages: English and Russian (she learned from her grandfather) and Cajun (some people swear it's another languge since it's a mix of english and french)

birthday and birth place: October 13th, in Washington (moved to Louisanna at age five)

sexuality: into boys

appearance:5'3 in height. She is slim and petitie due to having low nurishment as a child. Her brown hair is generally kept in a ponytail and turns red for a small time after shifting. Her wide green eyes are very expressive. Her ears are peirced but she hardly ever wears anything in them. Has a birthmark on her ankle that looks like a tattoo of a fox, it appeared when she was three and is thought to be because of her power.

attitude: A quiet girl that worries alot. She's not pessimistic, but neither is she overly optimistic either. Keeps most thoughts to herself.

Personality: A very caring girl, Cinder hates to see others hurting, but understands that at times it must happen, but she would rather not be the person to do it. She is very curious, but also very timid. She is loyal to a fault and will only trade loyality if she believes someone has become a lost cause that she can't help, but it would have to take a lot. Although she is loyal, she doesn't trust easily either and is very shy; however once she becomes close to someone, she will do all that she can to help them.

Beliefs: She isn't very religious, but sees no reason why someone can't believe in a God or Gods. Loves to learn about the anicent Greek Gods and the ancient Eyptian Gods as well. Believes everything happens for a reason.

Weapons: has a small curved dagger that is dark steel from her grandfather. Her fighting style (which she will have to take time to develop) is mixed and normally based on speed and which ever animal she can use to her advantage

skills (beside their power): Her power grants her the ability to do a great many things (sneak, destroy, fly, swim, etc.) because she can change into animals. As her power develops (see below) she'll become a better fighter and her senses will increase, as well as speed, agility, flexibity, and (slightly because she is so small) her strength.

Power:Cinder shifted into a fox when she was eight. Ever since then her power has been growing to where she can shift into any animal she has seen, although turning into a fox is the easiest and, because it was her first, it is her favoirte. As she grows up and her powers develop more, she is able to take on animalitic traits and abilities in her human form. When that happens, her green eyes turn red instead of her hair.

Weakness (power weakness and other weaknesses): Power-with the exception of her fox form, her power generally hurts her afterwards, either pyhical pain, or just making her sick for a small time, it is also hard for her to control all the animal forms (the more dangerous ones: shark, cobra, those types)when she shifts. Also because her hair turns red afterwards, it would be hard for her to lie about her powers or what she was up to. When her powers increase and her eyes turn red, she gets wild and it is hard for her to control : she jumps at loud noises and gets tongued tied and stutters when speaking to most people that she does not know very well. She also has a great need to prove herself, but fears letting anyone down

secrets: She never knew her father-who ends up being Russian mafia-and her grandfather took care of her most because her mother was a gold digger that kept leaving her with Cinder's grandfather for long periods of time, and coming back to take her away. Her grandfather taught her, her older brother Jack (also a mutant but disappers, he'd control darkness) and her cousins Rodd and Rodrick Russian, and was killed by his son's mafia. Her brother disappered and Cinder left with her mother for Lousianna. There an old cajun woman took care of her for the most part, before her motehr died because of Cinder's father, a very dark man who wants his son and daughter back (most likely for dark reasons) and Cinder ran and was taken to a hostipital of sorts where people wanted to experiment on her. Luckily, she was able to escape, although her friend Myach had thought to die in the escape. She fears the mafia and the hospital and longs to find her brother.

Allies: Jack (where ever he may be). A few cajun families down in Lousianna. Myach, if he is ever found out to be alive. Hopefully the banidts.

Enemies: Joseph (bully from her past, lightening mutant), Vladimir Bursht, her father and his mafia. And the Styles Insitute, the hospital that wanted to experiment on her.

Group: Alphas (for a little while it would be nice so that she could learn to be a better fighter) or Bandits (she could be a theif-she has the skills with her forms. But she would probably do best in the bandits or unseen.

Position in group: Scout, look out, theif, break in expert, all because her shift would do well for that. Also she would be a cook when powers aren't needed (like at home/camp)

Romantic interests (don't give me a specific person give me a type of person or an example, your character may or may not have a love relationship) : An older boy who seems to be a bad boy, but is sweet at heart who would get jealous easily (I know she's young, I could change that, unless you plan on ageing them as the story progresses). Someone who would protect her, but is not a goody two shoe type of guy (no one like Cyclops)

History (include before the war, maybe a bit about their family and how they found the group they are in if they are in one):

good/evil/neutral: Realitivly good when she truly has the choice, but neutral when others are making the decision

Views: She understands world peace does not exist and that there are some true dark and sick people out there, but wants to veiw the world as good at the whole and wishes for the day mutants can live peacefully and the day her father leaves her alone.

Clothing: She normally perfers jeans or any pants to skirts and dresses and wears a blue jean jacket that is much too big for her that used to belong to her older brother Jack. She would wear a dress for a speciel event, or a skirt if she got to go on a date (doubtful, but hey). Wears black or brown boots for most missions.

Possessions: Has a small brown backpack that is very old, keeps some light food in there and a bottle for water. A small blue blanket, and a book her grandfather gave her (Alice in Wonderland/Through the Looking Glass). All of which are kept in the backpack. She keeps the dagger in her boot when applicable. Has a silver locket that does not open.

Are you ok if I kill the character , put them in a slightly elicit scene or make minor changes to them? Yes to the last two, I don't like the first, but it is your story, so it's up to you, I won't get mad or flame you and I'll keep reading, but I hope you end up liking her enough to keep her around.

Anything else I need to know about them?: She is the illeiment child of the Russian mafia and is a good theif, although she never would steal if she didn't have to.

Give me a few plot ideas that I can use with them:

Starts out with the banidits as a scot/look out, gets kidnap by the alphas, whose leader likes her and decides to teach her how to fight better, and then escapes to try to find the bandits again, but ends up with the unseen or the sewer rats for a while before she can be reunited with what she calls her family, although their life is not one she would have wanted for herself. Her powers increase and she starts taking on animalistic traits in her human form, being able to claw people without having to shift, and running faster and all her senses growing stronger, scaring Cinder who fears that her powers might take her over and she could hurt someone.
Kairi Avalon chapter 2 . 4/16/2012
Name: Christine Rhodes

Nicknames and/or code name: Chris/you can decide the codename

Gender: female

age: 5

Nationality: half French/half American

Spoken languages: English, speak French and Spanish

birthday and birth place: August 8th/Ohio

sexuality: female

appearance: She is a bit short for her age and she has normal weight to. She has straight shorten length reddish brown hair that is in a pigtail. Pale but fair skin. You can do the rest.

attitude: you can decide

Personality: She is caring, down to earth, kindhearted, cheerful, carefree, outgoing, sincere, fun loving, helpful, selfless, courageous, playful, cunning, stubborn, and generous. She always there to cheer anyone who is feeling down and love to have fun. She can be serious when things are serious. She is not afraid to speak her mind and always there to put a smile on someone face. She is a genius/prodigy who can read better then anyone her age and she understand older people even if they think so don't. She may seem like a helpless naive five year old but she is far from it.

Beliefs: you can decide

Weapons: none she only five after all

skills: singing, drawing

Power: precognition-have the ability to foresee possible futures, telepathy, telekinetic teleportation, telekinesis, healing-can cure broken or withered plants, wounds, broken bones, low vitality, and even diseases(like Leo in Charmed)you can add more psychic/mental powers if you want to

Weakness: she get headaches sometimes

secrets: you can decide

Allies: you can decide

Enemies: you can decide

Group: unseen

Position in group: you can decide

Romantic interests: none she is five

History: She is an orphan since she two years old when her parents was killed in a car accident. You can decide the rest.

Views: you can decide

Clothing: you can decide

Possessions: a bottle of water, change of clothes, a pink backpack with pencils, sketchbooks, sleepingbag, flashlight, her teddy bear, a book, and other stuff to survive.

I'm okay with you killing or putting them in a slightly elicit scene or make minor changes to her.

Anything else I need to know about them?: If you want to she can have mind link with Axel which is the power to link minds with one other living person or creature through a close and permanant bond.

You can do any I missed.
crazyCULTure chapter 2 . 4/6/2012
Name: Griffin Lake

Nicknames and/or code name: Griff (nick) and Volt or Current (code name)

Gender: male

age: 14

Nationality (include accent if any): American, but his mom was Italian, so he has a slight Italian accent.

Spoken languages: English and Italian.

birthday and birth place: October the 29. Born in Manhattan.

sexuality: straight (this is right, yes?)

appearance ( include height, weight, hair color and style, skin color, eye color, body build, facial features and anything extra like scars, tattoos or piercings, or physical mutation if any, I think you get the point now): he has curly black hair that reaches about his shoulders. he has hazel eyes and long eyelashes. he’s a kind of boy that if his hair was longer, could pass for a decent girl, which he hates. his voice hasn’t changed yet either, so he doesn’t like that too. he is 5’4, weighs 116 lbs. and he has tan skin. he has a chipped front tooth from falling off a tree. he has a white scar just above his cheek from his dog.

attitude (basically the way the look at everything, are the negative all the time or perhaps very positive..etc..): optimist. Total optimist. Like, he sees the silver lining in everything. And, he’s a bit cocky.

Personality: if two words could describe him, it would be impatient and hyper. times about 10. he acts like he’s always high on coke, and he’s rarely calm (you know, unless they’re in a situation where he needs to be calm). he’s a jokester and sometimes doesn’t know when his jokes go too far. he’s caring, but he doesn’t show it most of the time. he has a terrible habit of acting spy and getting too much information out of people. and, he’s a prankster. and, they’re pretty cool, his pranks. and, in the face of authority, he NEVER BACKS DOWN. he doesn’t give respect to adults when it is needed. ever.

Beliefs: roman catholic.

Weapons (if any, be realistic, they aren't gonna have a grenade launcher and lazer guns, also include their fighting style): um, his power. But, he can fist fight. He isn’t perfect at it, but he is pretty decent.

skills (beside their power): hmm, whistling, sketching, annoying people (yes that’s a skill), and is the kind of person who can hear something and remember it. Sort of like audio photographic memory.

Power: not like Storm’s (because he can’t control weather), but it is (wait for it…) electrokinesis. he can manipulate electricity, whether it came from a computer, plug, or lightning. he can get it from rubbing his feet on carpet and store it or use it then and there. But, it doesn’t mean he never gets the brunt of it. Many a time he is all staticy and looks like he touched a light socket.

Weakness (power weakness and other weaknesses) : water hurts him. Bad. He goes all haywire and can’t control anything. And, he trusts people too easily (if they aren’t strict adults)

secrets: doesn’t have one. He blurts them out too frequently. But, if he had one, it would probably be that sometimes he really wishes he were human.

Allies: his group and family?

Enemies: anyone who hurts his allies?

Group (include at least two you'd prefer them to be in but I will have the final decision): Sewer Rats, Captured, or the Institute.

Position in group (ie: infirmary, weapons (teaching and making), guard and/ or look out, brute (defense, could teach the younger ones to fight), scout (goes out and collects resources). not all groups will have every one of these so choose two or give me one you come up with): lookout or scout

Romantic interests (don't give me a specific person give me a type of person or an example, your character may or may not have a love relationship) : I’d prefer not, but a person who has his same personality and is just a friend before anything else.

History (include before the war, maybe a bit about their family and how they found the group they are in if they are in one): well, first off, his family. his siblings, Jay and Phoenix, are very kind and friendly and sibling-ly. they get along very well. it’s his parents that are bad. they never liked him, especially after his appearance of his mutation when he was 10. they never liked mutants. so, they sort of treat him second class citizen at home. but, he makes well with this and learned the handy skill of stealing and pranking, so he isn’t helplessly lost. He found the group nearing the beginning of the war when his parents didn’t like him so much, he decided to leave. Um, I don’t exactly how to explain the meeting up to his group. Please do that.

good/evil/neutral: good.

Views (how do they view the world as it is, what do they think of the war and how do they view mutants and/or humans): he thinks the world can get be bad at times, but he doesn’t exactly like the state it is in now, but he tries to make light of it. He hates the war. Who would like it? He is sort of jealous of humans because of their treatment, but he trusts many other mutants.

Clothing (not just one outfit, give me a general idea dn maybe a few examples): he’s the kind of person who says, if it’s clean, I’ll wear it. So, it’s generally mixmatched. Yellow with blue, green with purple. And, he prefers t-shirts and shorts. Hope that’s good enough.

Possessions (what do they travel with ie: a backpack with a few changes of clothes, a bit of food, a water bottle.. etc. They are not going to me carrying makeup and hair products or laptops and game boys, be realistic. Also include anything they carry on their person): a backpack. With a compass, water bottle, some clothes, binoculars, a picture of his family during Christmas, and a pan flute. He likes music.

Are you ok if I kill the character , put them in a slightly elicit scene or make minor changes to them? ’s your story. Feel free. (but I will cry if you kill him)

Anything else I need to know about them?: nothing really.

Give me a few plot ideas that I can use with them: one) he is kidnapped by a bad sort, and two) he sort of makes his own little group. Not good plot ideas, I know.
GravityPush chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
Name: Julia Blanchet

Nicknames and/or code name: Aegis

Gender: Female

Age: 25

nationality: French, slight accent

Spoken Languages: English and French

birthday and birth place: March 3 Strasbourg, France

sexuality: straight

appearance: 5'7", 119 lbs, dark blonde hair in a bob cut with bangs to the right, light skin, orange eyes, slim but with curves, large eyes and small lips. She has a small, light scar of a knife cut right beside her left eye.

attitude: She's not that very trusting of humans.

Personality: She's always there for someone when they need her. She's very patient and believes in practical things, she doesn't set unrealistic standards. She can be stubborn and uncompromising, though she will listen to others ideas and takes them into consideration. And she's very possessive of her belongings. No matter what she tries to keep the people she is around safe whether she likes them or not.

Beliefs: She beliefs that there are some humans willing to help mutants, but that belief slowly diminishes with each passing day.

Weapons: A switch blade.

skills: She's pretty fast with her knife.

Power: Julia can create force fields that absorb all damage. She can either exert the damage she absorbed to heal others or its used as an offensive attack as regular energy(she doesn't really use it offensively).

Weakness: The smaller the shield the stronger it is, the bigger the weaker it is. Creating a shield for more than five people causes the shield to become weaker than it normally is and it can't absorb as much damage. So the people within it can get hurt. She's more defensive than offensive. If she doesn't have her knife she can fight back but she's not that strong.

Secrets: She keeps a black flask with her. She claims its water but its actually alcohol, because of that she doesn't share. She drinks but not excessively to the point of being an alcoholic.

Allies:

Enemies: Her sister

Group: Sewer rats or bandits

Position: infirmary, scout or look out

Romantic interests: Someone older who she can either relate to and have an intellectual conversation with where similarities and differences

History: She was attending her sophomore year in college before the war. She constantly wore contact lenses or dark glasses to hide her eyes from people. Growing up her older sister, Florence, hated her because of her mutation (eyes and powers). This caused a lot of fighting a disagreement within the family. Both parents tried not to treat both children differently. Julia ended up finding her group either because she ran down into the sewers after being chased or because she ran into a junk yard.

good/evil/neutral: good

Views: She just wants all the fighting to end and she thinks that the humans are right about mutants being too dangerous(she'd never admit it), she doesn't like the fact that a lot of people are dying.

Clothing: Ripped dark skinny jeans, baggy dirty white shirt, worn out brown leather jacket, an old baseball hat and a pair of black worn out converse. Beige tank top with green jacket and cargo pants, finger-less gloves of the same color, tan boots and a hat. images/search?qresidentevilmovieclaire&viewdetail&id&first31&FORMIDFRIR

Possessions: a small backpack with a pair of pants and shirt, protein bar( if she can find any), her flask and one bottle of water.

Are you okay if I kill the character, put them in a slightly elicit scene or make minor changes? Anything really can happen to her just don't kill her.

Anything else I need to know: Nope

Give me a few plot ideas that I can use with them: She eventually sees her older sister, Florence, who is a politician while she helps a fellow mutant escape capture or something. Julia can be thrown into a situation where she is nearly captured with a few other mutants, where they try to rebel and escape their imprisonment.
Purple Zippyness chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
I realised I didn't fill in the skills part of Lissie's form : o

Sorry. You're obviously planning on using her for something, but can I put she's not incompetent at cooking, and she can swim and climb fairly well. I thought I'd submit another, and good luck with your story.

Name:Nathan Paul White

Nicknames: Nate

Code name: Translate

Gender: Male

Age: 6

Nationality: British

Spoken languages: English, French, German, Italian, Spanish.

Birthday and birth place: 28th August, London

Sexuality: Straight

Appearance:

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He's 2'4, weighing 59 ibs.

Attitude: Fairly positive, as the negatives scare him.

Personality:Nate is a very quiet child. He doesn't really like to be taken notice of or made a fuss over, he's quite shy and withdrawn. It takes a while for him to open up and trust someone, he's not hostile, but he's incredibly distrustful of adults. He prefers the company of animals to that of humans, he feels far safer in their company. His seemingly sweet nature makes him appear to be a sitting target, which he might be to some people, but he's prepared to fight for his freedom and his life, and he'll give it everything he has-even if that isn't very much.

Beliefs: None, he doesn't really understand.

Weapons: Slingshot.

Skills: Good aim with slingshot, climbing, disabling animal traps.

Power:Omni-linguism. He instantly knows how to speak any languages he hears. This works for animals too. He also has an incredibly good sense of hearing.

Weakness:

He has to hear the language spoken, at least two sentences.

He can hear everything going on around him for about thirty foot.

Loud noises cause him pain.

He is terrified of deep water.

He is useless in close or hand-to-hand combat.

He is nervous of everything that he doesn't know or understand.

Secrets: None

Allies: His pets, his group.

Enemies: Mutant-haters, people that hurt him/his friends.

Group: The Unseen, Bandits or Alphas.

Position in group: Often acts as a scavenger/scout, and brings back overheard news if he thinks it's important.

Romantic interests: None

History: Originally from London, his family moved to California after his father was promoted. His parents were only interested in their work and social life, and he withdrew, finding comfort in the wildlife outside. His parents found out about his linguism, but chose to try and overlook it, refusing to believe he was a mutant. When the war hit, he ran from home before his parents could throw him out, joining his friends in the forest and later joining his group.

Good/evil/neutral: Good

Views: The world is scary. The war is even more scary. Humans are really scary because they might try and kill him. Mutants are fairly scary because they might try and hurt him.

Clothing:Jacket, generally black or brown over a t-shirt, normally yellow or red, along with jeans and hard-wearing boots of some sort.

Possessions: Small backpack with three spare t-shirts, a spare set of jeans and several sets of underwear in, a small water bottle, and the fruits and berries that he has collected. He carries his slingshot in an inside pocket of his jacket, and has two pockets full of small stones as well as a few rubber bands.

Are you ok if I kill the character , put them in a slightly elicit scene or make minor changes to them?: Yes

Anything else I need to know about them?: The animals he travels with he sees as his family, and he has at least two of them with him at all times.

Jasper, his “brother”

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Silah, his “Sister”

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Milee, his little sister.

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Sidney, his brother/best friend/bodyguard

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Give me a few plot ideas that I can use with them: Being found by his group in the forest where he is living. Him being exposed to a loud continuing noise, which would hurt his ears. Learning to trust people, or someone injuring/killing one of his pets/siblings.
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