Reviews for Make a Home Down There
LouiseKurylo chapter 1 . 8/27/2015
Beautifully written, perfect interaction between Jane and Jane. My only complaint is that I wish you continued it. Thank you.
MissPilot chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
I hope you'll continue on with this one too!
Anna chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
This really sounds interesting! More would be great:)
ClaMiAl chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
Ohhh, I love fics where we got to see a bit more of Jane's family or his past. Nice. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Rach112 chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
I'm already in love with this plot. Such a refreshing change from what I normally read! Great character interactions. This story has so much potential, I really hope you update soon!
Kaoh chapter 1 . 3/30/2012
Great start - I'm keen to see where you take this!
TheMentalistGirl chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
OMG! Keep writing! I need read more! Please!
justlook3 chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
Very intriguing premise, hope to see more of it very soon.
V.Evergreen chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
Pleas earth on I can't wait to see the rest especially if Lisbon every meets Jane Snr. :)
nic73 chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
I'm loving the start of this, excellent work. I am intrigue to see what you have in store. A lovely Jane you have there.
kimmers44 chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
im intrigued!
mentalistfan123 chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
Oooh, I like the plot! It's pretty original, actually! :D And it's interesting.

I like how you wrote the first scene with Jane and his dad. Very well-written.

Please update! :D
mihenna chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
I'm appropriately intrigued, and you've a good knack for capturing a natural dialogue amongst members of the team. Please, I do hope you'll go on... I feel like this could get very interesting.

I look forward to the next chapter.
MissDonniex chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
So great...