Reviews for The Moon Child's Ball
Guest chapter 1 . 4/10
In the first chapter, I think you meant 'dam', not the swearword. Lol.
IceBabe7723 chapter 7 . 3/26
I'm thinking Idea #1 is more realistic in terms of Fudge's character. So that might be a better option.
angelic hellcat chapter 7 . 3/25
i like idea #2 with umbitch manipulating or even putting fudge under the imperious to get sent to hogwarts but then being found out by maybe amelia bones or shackelbolt then having shackelbolt as the new defense teacher i don't know just an idea and don't worry about canon or non canon just try to go with the flow. also why did you have katie and harry together when it was just for harry and luna and plus aren't they like siblings there was no real lemon so why? and with fleur too it just didn't make any sense. also tracey davis name always shows up in bold so am i correct in guessing she has an important role coming up soon? all in all great story i really enjoyed it as i don't think there is enough of harry and luna stories though i am more into harry and snape stories. again thanks for the good read and i can't wait for the sequel. oh yeah and poor krum oh well
Violensa chapter 2 . 3/20
I'm very disappointed I really enjoyed the first chapter. I absolutely adored the interaction between Harry and Luna. Then in this chapter you have Harry hooking up with Katie who is apparently a sisterly figure to him? What exactly was the point of that :/? Unfortunately I don't believe I can read anymore, I apologize. Best of luck in your future writing endeavors though!
dashundra89 chapter 7 . 3/17
Idea#2 and please free Sirius. Turn in Worm tail. Let Luna give Harry the idea to swear on his magic that Sirius was innocent. Just an idea...I'm not creative enough to write stories. I really like this story.
Cristin Gryphon chapter 7 . 3/13
very nice, can't wait for more. I'll leave a more complete review at the end of the story. :)

Thank you for taking the time to write and post this story.
tim223 chapter 7 . 3/11
I like idea 2. it sounds more real. fudge breaking down would just show weakness to the masses and not gain much support. but given that the people of power are largely pure blood gives more chance to a riddle based minister. what ever you decide i look forward to the next story.
Elysha Hope chapter 7 . 3/5
I like idea #2 but have you thought of changing it up a bit and have Malfoy Sr. bully the board of governors into making Umbridge the defense professor?
xxPercyRoxxx chapter 7 . 3/4
Update soon please
Elaine's Spike chapter 7 . 3/3
looking forward to the sequel.
Knightshade93 chapter 7 . 3/2
I think trying to keep as cl;ose to canon as possible would be the most challenging, thus increasing your skill as an author.
so having him break down in a similar way that he does in OotP would give a more satisfying story for you to write rather then taking the easy way out.
Witty Eagle Proud Ravenclaw chapter 1 . 2/28
On one of my late-night fanfiction trips and OH MY ROWLING THIS IS SOOOOOO CUTE! I appreciate the creative license you've taken (Lisa Turpin and Padma Patil being in Luna's year, and Susan Bones being blonde) and the direction of your story just seems to be wonderfully crafted. I'll say it again - OMR!
prymael1 chapter 7 . 2/27
There's a couple of comments that have said it, but I too would like to point out that no matter what Fudge may or may not have in mind towards the war efforts, Umbridge is still her own nasty same self, which includes plotting and being vindictive towards those she finds unfitting in her magical ideas. Easiest is to keep simple and have people be themselves which includes her plotting to gain power even if it means her "playing nice" to get there only to cause issues later.

Thanks for a great story and sharing.
Valentina Alexandrea Sparrow chapter 7 . 2/22
The seconded because imbitch is a really important part... Or you can have her still hate creatures but not do anything and be semi nice or still be a bitch and do all that jazz and get fired by fudge when he finds out what she did?
Divine Me chapter 7 . 2/17
Idea #3: Attempted assassination of Fudge, saved by Harry, and is an impetus to get MoM cleaned of DE's and their supporters.

Waiting for sequel. I like Luna and Harry pairing. Please make sure nasty _itch Cho gets slammed!

Anne
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