Reviews for Live and Let Die re do
0namakiza0 chapter 7 . 3/4/2013
Firstly I would like to say that I am SO EXTREMELY SORRY for not reading this before! OMG I favorited and followed the ocs needed story a long time ago in case there was an update and you started writing but you never even gave me a head's up XD It was LAST night that I had the BRILLIANT idea to go check your profile and here I am It was a good story, but I agree- too many OCs, which is why I won't be offended if you don't use mine this time (although I did see Mila make a cameo and it made me happy, lol)
You really need to give an update or something that I can see XD Or else I have no idea that you're even writing...
I did notice, however that there aren't many reviews after '12, which makes me kinda worried XD I hope I'm not too late I'm gonna PM my characters to you anyway (Cuz I did a reboot of one of them) If you don't need them, then just reply back please :3 Thanks
A Half-Empty Glass chapter 8 . 7/17/2012
Name: Mariska Sampson

Nicknames and/or code name: Maris/Tcelfer (Reflect backwards, pronounced Tuh-kel-fuhr)

Gender: Female

age: 19

Nationality (include accent if any): American, though her parents aren’t. A Brooklyn accent

Spoken languages: English and Hungarian

birthday and birth place (I dont mean what hostpital or if they were born in a f*cking toilet, I mean state or country): 4/01 and in Brooklyn, hopefully not on a toilet

sexuality: Straight

appearance ( include height, weight, hair color and style, skin color, eye color, body build, facial features and anything extra like scars, tattoos or piercings, or physical mutation if any, I think you get the point now): She’s 6’3”, 170 pounds, due to her mutation she’s unable to grow hair, so she’ll occasionally wear wigs, bright orange skin with ridges along her arms, stomach, collar bone, forehead, feet, and her eyes are all pupils, so no iris/color. Her body shape is more muscular, but still feminine. She has a square shaped face, an upturned nose, slightly wider eyes, and a full mouth. While using her powers, her eyes take on a mirror like quality to them

Personality: A jack of all trades, she likes to make money and do odd jobs for many people. Due to her skills, she knows a lot about everyone and knows her ways around a lot of places. Because she needs to be good with people, she is a charmer and can be a bit of a flirt, and knows how to handle many kinds of people. Maris does have a manipulative side. She prefers to be called Maris to Mariska and can get a bit mad about it. Maris is resourceful and a bit of a McGuyver, showing above level intelligence. Pretty decent with computer, she also can run background checks and is great with finding out almost anyone’s whole life story. It’s hard for her to be at a loss for words, and is rarely speechless. She usually likes to get the last word in on things and almost always needs to get her two cents in. In high school, she’d get in a lot of fights because she didn’t know when to shut up. While she doesn’t think of herself as a bad person, she knows she could almost never be a hero. Maris is used to lying and sometimes doesn’t know when not to. She’s afraid of appearing vulnerable so she’ll do the best to be strong, and doesn’t know when to let go of her emotions. Maris does have issues with morality and crosses some lines that shouldn’t be. She tries to seem proud of her physical mutation and powers, but in reality it takes a lot for her to go through every day

Beliefs: Shades of grey exist everywhere; it’s not only black and white. If you meant religious, she has no opinion
Weapons (if any, be realistic, they aren't gonna have a grenade launcher and lazer guns): Glock 19 she stole from a police officer, aka her father, and a few pocket knives.

Skills (beside their power, include fighting style): Computer skills, manipulation, and disguise. She fights more defensively but knows how to pack a punch

Power: Either with reflective surfaces/mirrors or a reflective surface that she creates with her hands, she can use it to reflect back an energy based power or elemental based (but only fire and water, not earth and rarely air) power at the same force as it was sent towards her. The mirror/reflective surface can also be used as a force field that breaks after one use, and even as transportation if she’s visited the place before. She can only transport one other person with him and no more than that. Lastly, with a lot of concentration she can use mirrors as viewing screens but she must be using one mirror to look through another

Weakness (power weakness and other weaknesses) : Power-wise: Can only transport herself, if she tries to transport someone else, she collapses and goes into a coma for a length of time dependent on the distance travelled. Each force field breaks after one hit, and it takes some effort to create them, so it tires her out. Can only reflect energy based power and only fire and water elemental based powers. Her eyes are light sensitive
Other: Not trustworthy, which works both ways. (She doesn’t trust people easily and they don’t trust her easily). Cannot hide easily due to her height and physical mutation.

secrets: She is secretly ashamed of her physical mutation. Wishes she could both have her powers and look normal.

Allies: Few and far between. The only person she really relies on is herself


Group (include at least two you'd prefer them to be in but I will have the final decision): Sewer rats, or Alphas

How they found/joined the group: She was found by them. They heard of someone who was rumored to be able to get what you want, no matter what the cost. It took some convincing, but after her “home” was destroyed, she decided to join

Position in group (ie: infirmary, weapons (teaching and making), guard and/ or look out, brute (defense, could teach the younger ones to fight), scout (goes out and collects resources). not all groups will have every one of these so choose two or give me one you come up with): Scout, or middle man

Romantic interests (don't give me a specific person give me a type of person or an example, your character may or may not have a love relationship) : Yes, but only someone with a strong personality. Or if you want to keep it interesting, someone somewhat meek

History (include before the war, maybe a bit about their family and how they found the group they are in if they are in one): Her grandfather was actually part of the mob in New York. Throughout her life, she balanced life as a cop’s daughter and a mobster’s granddaughter. While at home her parents were happy with her straight A’s and tennis awards, her grandfather was happy with her cunning and manipulative personality. Her father taught her to shoot a gun and how to help people, and her grandfather taught her to break a man’s arms and help people get what they want.

good/evil/neutral: Neutral

Views (how do they view the world as it is, what do they think of the war and how do they view mutants and/or humans): No matter what way the world is, it’s never going to be fair and it will always have turmoil. No matter how hard she tries to understand, however, she’s not sure how mutants, who are so powerful and can do things humans only dream of, are being overrun by humans. She thinks mutants have so much power, but oppression has kept them at the bottom. Maris also thinks mutants should do what’s necessary to get to where they deserve, but is a little wary about the killing that will ensue

Clothing (not just one outfit, give me a general idea and maybe a few examples): She dresses slightly proper, but, of course, she doesn’t dress like in high school where she still had the resources. Mostly collared shirts, long and short sleeved, pin striped, solid, and different colors for tops, high waisted shorts, or low slung pants with one coattail of a collared shirt tucked in and the other left out for bottoms, and brown hiking boots make up her outfits.

Possessions (what do they travel with ie: a backpack with a few changes of clothes, a bit of food, a water bottle.. etc. They are not going to me carrying makeup and hair products or laptops and game boys, be realistic. Also include anything they carry on their person): A canvas rucksack, dried meats and fruit, reusable water bottle with filtration built in, sleeping bag, and an old PDA

Are you ok if I kill the character , put them in a slightly elicit scene or make minor changes to them? Ugh, you can kill her….if you want to… But go right ahead with elicit scenes, or minor changes

Anything else I need to know about them?: She smokes, but is trying to stop

Give me a few plot ideas that I can use with them (optional): 1) Caught by humans, and because of her orange skin, they strip her (okay that sounds creepy, but yeah) and treat her as an animal, not a human. 2) Gives up smoking and becomes somewhat neurotic. 3) Her grandfather appears
Purple Zippyness chapter 8 . 7/16/2012
I don't know whether I'm a bit late, but please keep my character Elizabeth Lily Owens (Thief) in the story. She was a sewer rat before.
Kairi Avalon chapter 7 . 7/15/2012
Matthew Ryder-keep him in the story.
TheWritingGirl23 chapter 7 . 7/14/2012
I'm all into supporting this story, even if you have to reboot it again. Sometimes things work, sometimes they don't. This sight is about having fun and polishing up our crafts.

And yes, I would still like Pandora to remain the the story.
EsaEnai chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
Also: Danny is an Alpha, Harrison is a Sewer Rat, and Mick is with the Bandits. Tell me when you're accepting- I'm interested in making Foxtrot.
EsaEnai chapter 7 . 7/14/2012
Did you forget Gamma? You know: Alpha, Beta, Gamma, Delta, Epsilon...

Also: please keep Danny Comeau, Alex Harrison and Mick Harrison in your story. I'm not sure I submitted any more, but if I did kindly remind me. Thank you!
San child of the wolves chapter 7 . 7/14/2012
Cool. So let's see my characters are Blake *Blade* Semi(he can still be a bounty hunter if need be) and Noctis *Weapon* Caelum(he can be a leader for one of the groups and you can change his age to being older). And if you can't use these characters I want to make Foxtrot.
James95 chapter 7 . 7/14/2012
Well, if you think a reboot is right then you should do it. Please keep Lilli and Jordan Pastelle (My OCs) in it? Thanks.
TheWritingGirl23 chapter 6 . 5/31/2012
So the time travel plot is finally coming into play. I cant help but ask, how will all these plots tie together? I just can't figure it out.
TheWritingGirl23 chapter 5 . 4/28/2012
Congratulations on almost graduating! I can't wait till I do. Liked the update and am anticipating the next. Keep up the great writing :)
KA chapter 4 . 4/17/2012
Great story and chapter. Thanks for using Matt. Hope to read more and update as soon as you can.
TheWritingGirl23 chapter 4 . 4/17/2012
You nailed Chelsea in a few lines, good job :) and I recognize Matt, so it's cool to have him on the team.

Also, what's up with Axel and his past? Update soon so we can figure out more!
James95 chapter 4 . 4/17/2012
Nice chapter, Dr Bear may be the new knitted character! Hope to see Jordan and Lilli in this soon
San child of the wolves chapter 4 . 4/16/2012
Lovely chapter. You played Blade really well. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Good luck with it.
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