Reviews for What If A Series of Shorts
tessnotbess chapter 4 . 5/25/2014
eeee! I love the new additions! I get so excited every time you update this, and this was no disappointment! I miss their little exchanges so much, and you capture them so well. I really like how you put John into Natalie's story during that horrid time they didn't even talk to each other; what bs writing that was lol, I wish these moments had been real!
Athena13 chapter 4 . 4/19/2014
Definitely another "if only" that I can get on board with!
Athena13 chapter 3 . 4/19/2014
I have to agree with kevin's jab there; but still loved this "what if" peek. Seriously. What if.
Dee chapter 4 . 4/19/2014
Loved it!
BekaRoo chapter 4 . 4/11/2014
I am so glad you are continuing this. I hope you continue some of your others as well.
Athena13 chapter 2 . 8/16/2013
Powerful.
Athena13 chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
Ah, if only McPain could ever have been so understanding (and no, I'm not giving Natalie a pass for the lies). This was a nice blast from the past!
jadesha chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
love it hope theres more.
Nise chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
Loved it! Can't wait for another chapter. I miss Jolie. *sigh*
BekaRoo chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
Great chapter I love Natalie and I can not wait to see what happens next :D