|Reviews for Lived To Fight Another Day|
| Shadowdawn199 chapter 2 . 10/14/2012
I like your OCs. I wonder what's going to next? Great story, I love it so far. Keep going strong, this is awesome.
| Feanor the Dragon chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
Wow... Pretty great beginning to your story!
The only thing I would suggest is that you start a new paragraph when you start a quotation, as the way it is all in one paragraph makes it somewhat awkward to read and hurts the flow of the story.
Other than that, Great job!
Keep it up, My friend!
While I yet tarry in sane,
| Fenrir Connell chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
And this is the so called FanFic. I'm glad you decided to post it!
It was a nice read after all, I was about to point a tense mistake, but then I realized Foam was a subject. LoL. So it was flawless. Not much has happened yet, tough. But knowing your skill, I know it will be amazing! Oh, and you did introduce us to a few OC's. Nice.
I'm looking forward to your next update, keep being great!
| Spyrofan777 chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
:D Yea! Awesome start!
I hope for more soon!