|Reviews for Fine|
| celinenaville chapter 1 . 1/30/2016
Ooooo. Like this one too.
| Ghanaperu chapter 1 . 1/14/2014
This seems really poignant, in the sad but deep sort of way.
| BrOnZe-N-SilVeR chapter 1 . 12/21/2013
This is so great. It embodies them perfectly!
| DeansBabyBird chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
Interesting...like a litany, a chant, maybe a prayer!
| The Solver chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
True, and sad. I feel sorry for Dean. He has so much on him and never shares it, it must hurt, like a knife in his chest. This was a good story though, even if it is sad. Thanks for sharing. Lots of Love- The Solver
| Nana56 chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
LOL No! Please don't stop what you're doing! I'm enjoying these! :D
| ccase13 chapter 1 . 3/30/2012
This is a very true to the Winchesters conversation.
| GaelicAngel chapter 1 . 3/30/2012
Oh this was just so emotional and I love the fact that it could only be Sam that could call Dean on his lies. You captured Dean just so perfect and emotional.
I loved this and it was fantastically written, great short story and please don't ever stop.
| mb64 chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
Very nicely done! I like this a lot.
| nwspaprtaxis chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
This. This so much. This is raw and painful and how I feel. *begins to tear up* You've captured Dean exactly right here. Now if only Sam'd push that much little bit harder and just get Dean to unload a little, to share the burden... *sniffles*
This, though, got to me:
""He grips the neck of the bottle with the same strength he'd use if he'd ever have to pull Sam off of a cliff. / He grips the neck of the bottle like he's holding onto the world. / But he feels his fingers slipping... one by one.""
| Marlowe97 chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
Short and distinct. No useless words, no colorful image and yet, brilliantly glittering.
(see? You being poetic is infective! :-D )
| CeCe Away chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
| Rosetta Brunestud chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
Great short one! *_*
I really like the way it's written. That's very nice
Do not stop, I'm enjoying it! LOL It's amazing ;D