Reviews for If You Jump
BossMan1a22 chapter 1 . 3/9
I think that was amazing. i'm hoping to improve my writing it sucks any pointers?
willalyss901 chapter 1 . 2/23
OMG YOU MADE ME CRY
I started crying when alyss started recalling Will's letter to Halt... why did you have to kill him... crying again

GREAT STORY ALBEIT THE DEATH OF WILL
Skyvlin chapter 1 . 12/28/2014
WHY DID WILL HAVE TO DIE! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! But great story!
Robin Wild chapter 1 . 5/20/2014
That was amazing and also really sad.
Alyss Mainwaring chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
I just realised that I never reviewed this wonder piece of work...

I cried just then reading it :) I want to know more and for this to be continued but then I don't because I feel as though it would ruin it :) But this was wonderful as it is :)

Wonder... Apparently my new word of the day :)

Happy new year!

Aly
greenwings33 chapter 1 . 12/8/2013
I'm sitting here trying not to cry... :'(
whentheresawill chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
So djffjx fhj r gh hg d sf jd fh h I don't have words! But your skill in writing is AMAZING
Guest chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
You cried?! How about those poor souls who read it? (sniff sniff) Will...
Caithlinn13 chapter 1 . 5/3/2013
Do not cry! Do not cry. DoNotCry-donotcry...
in vain...
Guinevere137 chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
That note nearly sent me to tears man. I love this character to much.
Maddelynn Sky chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
oh my god. it was good but im in tears, nice job though it was really detailed
PopperNickle chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
D; I hoenstly crying my eyes out! But, you make truly heart-stopping stories. And believe me,your utterly amazing. Hope you keep writing with your awsomeness! :')
blackvelvet33 chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
WHY do you have to be so good at writing sad stories? If angst can be awesome, then this is. Vivid imagery, great characterization of Alyss, everything came together to make a great one-shot. Poor Will. Poor Alyss. Poor tissue box. Awesome job!

Lily
Mychele O'Carrik of Clonmel chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
Soooooo sad!:( thats horribly !;( very well written, and captivating vocab. I don't really like char death fics like this; they seem kinda pointless most of the time, he Just gets randomly captured, dissapears, and show up so different: that being said, I have to admit that I like this, but I prefer angst that has sufficient reason besides torturing the chars. That's just my honest opinion. But u deffinately write extremely well!:)

God bless, Mychele
M chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
I love this! Please write both, Will's perspective AND what happens next!
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