|Reviews for The Secret Identity of John Watson|
| BeyondMyReach chapter 3 . 3/9
omg. lovely and hilarious. You managed to write from a OC's perspective, give her a 3D realistic life without her overshadowing our lovely men. Love how you wrote Sherlock and John. You got them right on the dot and this totally reminds me of the first ep when John got into Sherlock's life. This time, at least Sam has someone to kinda explain stuff to her.
| Fantasy101 chapter 3 . 3/4
I really love this. I normally dislike fanfic with unknown mary-sues as main characters but Sam and the girls were written really well! The relationships where spot on and fun. The story was written well and it was fun. All up I loved it! :)
| guesty chapter 3 . 2/23
I have never read anything funnier in my life! It's amazing!
| Denise03460 chapter 1 . 2/16
This story is great! I haven't laughed so much reading a story in a long time. You have a wonderful talent for writing humor.
| cethmistmyk chapter 3 . 2/13
I love it! It was HILARIOUS! to see sherlock and John from an outside view! :-D I feel like there is more to this story, but the ending is pretty good as is! :-D
| gatwickthecat chapter 3 . 2/8
I haven't read all the reviews for this story, so apologies if someone else has already picked up on the same issue.
Your writing is good, but it is very obvious that you are an American as you consistently use vocabulary that is not English usage.
For example, we do not use the term 'slicker', we would use Raincoat. We do not say 'Auto', but car. Bank Tellers are Cashiers in the UK. The whole banking thing is not right for the UK as our banking systems are not the same as the US. The girls' conversations are littered with americanisms (not a criticism of americanisms, just that the girls are supposed to be English). There are many, many of these little slips, which do spoil the story for a Brit. My recommendation is to get a British Beta who will Anglicise your vocabulary.
| wdlwbt chapter 3 . 2/6
This was very amusing. Thank you :)
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/29
hehehehe! this is hilarious! (and your friends are crazy)
| Paralelsky chapter 3 . 1/21
This was hilarious and incredibly well written. The girls are a laugh, John is long-suffering and Sherlock is just begging for a slap, while being perfectly in-character. Can you tell how much I loved reading this story? :D
Have a wonderful day,
| The Happiest chapter 3 . 1/21
| Winnie69 chapter 3 . 1/19
I'm still smirking...
Rabid otter?!.. Priceless
I mean, where do u get this from?!
Awesome. Funny , fast paced accurate-voiced conversation.
| d1x1lady chapter 3 . 12/29/2013
Another absolutely awesome story. Love your work!
| Once Upon a Faerytale chapter 3 . 12/28/2013
I read this while watching Baskerville, and I read Sherlock saying "He is the British government" just as he said it in the episode. XD
Loved the story, and the OCs.
| rana2001 chapter 3 . 11/25/2013
I LAUGHED SO MUCH IT HURT YOU DON'T UNDERSTAAAND
| rana2001 chapter 1 . 11/25/2013
THIS IS TOO FUNNY
*explodes from laughing*