Reviews for Love Never Dies
Brindabella chapter 7 . 4/22/2012
Never fear - in coming chapters the feeling definitely shifts and it will not be as Jen and Nick centric. And certainly as it continues it focusses a lot on Allie especially, and a little on Matt and Rhys.

I know it is fluffy right now, boy do I know, but it won't always be that way.

Please do continue reading and let me know what you think of it :D I really really REALLY appreciate you reading and appreciate even more your reviews.

Brinds
Maggiemay chapter 7 . 4/22/2012
Nice story. I agree with the previous reviewer, that it would be good to see how the other members of Homicide reacted to Nick and Jen's pairing - on that note, if I had any criticism at all, it would be that your fic is very Nick and Jen centric. I guess that was your idea, however I think there's a danger in it appearing too "fluffy" when it concentrates solely on their relationship, with little input from other characters. I also think you need to be careful not to lose the practicality and straightness that define the character of Jen. Other than that, the fic is very well written and I look forward to seeing where it heads.
Flash chapter 7 . 4/21/2012
Love your story, very romantic. I like the way you have used Jen's feelings from when she broke up with Nick. You write very well with great expression. I would liked to of seen how the other members of homicide would of reacted to Nick and Jen being a couple, but that is just me. I think you are doing a great job with this fan fic.
notactiveaccount12 chapter 7 . 4/20/2012
I know I've read this before and you know what I think about it but I couldn't help reading this again :) The diary entries just get better and better and they're giving an amazing insight into Jen's mind and what she's thinking. You should be really happy with the decision to incorperate this element into your fic :) OHMYGOSH their wedding was so cute and perfect and wonderful and Nick's speech made the knees buckle but left me with one question...Nick Buchanan why you so perfect?

" "Because Jen it…it was always you," he said quietly into the microphone. "I never believed in forever until I met you. But now I know…I'll love you forever." " are you seriously trying to kill me here? haha GORGEOUS man that Nick Buchanan is ;) hehe

Oh and the lyrics fit in really well and worked wonders :) Fantastic writing as always, keep 'em coming :) x
notactiveaccount12 chapter 6 . 4/19/2012
This fic seriously makes me wish we'd seen more of Nick&Jen together- they would make the best parents ever! :) I really am loving the diary entries you have Jen writing, you've really hit the nail on the head there, her thoughts are spot on! (well spot on to what I imagine them to be but you know what I mean :D . The ute moment made me laugh so much, he really starts to complain and I love that he fell for Jen's little joke. I know from a writer's POV you're probably looking for constructive criticism so you can make this even better but honestly I cannot fault it at all. You just seem to be getting better and better with each chapter, well done. Tis' just fantastic :) more please! haha x
notactiveaccount12 chapter 5 . 4/18/2012
I feel the sudden expectation to live up to my previous review so I will do my best! :) I don't think these two can possibly get any cuter or more perfect or sweet or all things beautiful! JEN IS PREGNANT! YAY! Awwwww YAY! hehehe So lovely! It's really fantastical (I don't think that was a word but I say it is now! hehe :D )- the way you've put detail into her thoughts and well her telling Nick it doesn't get much darned more fluffy. Please be writing more soon :) xx
notactiveaccount12 chapter 4 . 4/16/2012
Excuse me for a moment whilst I pick up my jaw from the floor...okay I'm back now ;) hehehe. So I am fast finding difficulty in coming up with different ways to tell you how much I love this story (let's face it the thesaurus ain't that great a tool haha) but its SO DARNED GOOD! Normally I don't like to read a fic if I'm already a few chapters ahead but there is never a moments hesitation when I see you have posted yet another chapter on here. You have Nick and Jen down to a tee, even if we never got to see this side of them really you can just tell this is exactly what they would have been like. Everything about them and they ways they show their love for eachother is just adorable and sweet and fluffy and cute and all this fantastic. Your descriptions never fail to be spot on. Again the only downside to any of this is Nick is too darned perfect for his own good, I want a man just like him! haha and as for that last bit in chapter four could their story get anymore perfect and wonderful? :D PLEASE PLEASE don't stop writing this fic, or stop writing EVER- you really do have a great talent there Riss :) xx
notactiveaccount12 chapter 2 . 4/11/2012
At the risk of repeating myself and sounding strangely like my last review- you know how much I adore this fic! And I certainly didn't tire of reading this chapter (or the one before it hehe) over and over again. I love the exploration of Nick&Jen's relationship, seeing them together and so happy when the end of Ghosts left so much to be assumed. Hehehe as for the end ;) CUTENESS! You are a fantastic writer :) Keep it up :) x
Wiggle34 chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
WOW interesting start wonder where your going with this one :)
notactiveaccount12 chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
YAY! I am beyond excited to see this finally posted on here, and I had no hesitation in reading this again and again. You know how much I love this fic and your work, but ohmygoodness! This fic is just filled with Nick&Jen goodness, all the cute moments and fluffiness is just so good :) Your descriptions as always are fantastic! The only downside to this chapter (or fic in general) is Nick is so god damn perfect that it makes me want my own Nick Buchanan! hahaha ;) can't wait to read the rest :) - Kirsten x
goalattack chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Awww Lovechunks I have read and reviewed this before but I couldn't resist having another read. You really are a brilliant writer. I think this may have had another edit since I last read? It's so good. I only skimmed tonight but will read more closely tomorrow when I'm not so tired.
Maggiemay chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
Lovely surprise to get back on this site and find a new story. Well written as always but I'm guessing from the genre that all is not going to end well. Shame. Your writing is wonderfully descriptive. Look forward to reading your next installment :)
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