Reviews for Saving Mary
jilburfm chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
Super duper sad. Great job!
Drowning in Chaos chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
Sad. Clever. Beautiful.
Rz9696 chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
I was so relieved she wasn't mourning Jasper. Alice without him doesn't make sense:)
RaindropSoup chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
Oh, what a wonderful entry. You actually made me cry! So sad, but beautiful and endearing. Loved the little twists with Jacob and Rose and that you used an original character while giving a nod to canon. Great, GREAT one shot for this contest.
BestScentEver chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
Wah! Oh you made me cry! I love this story. It's heartbreaking and so lovely. Thank you for writing it.
Michaela07 chapter 1 . 3/30/2012
Hi, nice story. The only thing that I've found pretty distracting is that so many sentences begin with "she" or "he."
letzigprincess chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
It took me until she was at the grave to realize that she wasn't mourning Jasper and I loved the way you built that up! Good luck with the story :)