Reviews for Fullmetal Twitilight REWRITTEN
Crickett5 chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
The original still sucks but I love this version. It makes sense and I didn't choke while reading it! Good job!
ThugSeme chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
I still hate this story...but you made it better...now I can read it without choking on my own spit (as nasty as that sounds, it happened...)
All in all...good job :)
Alice Kirkland FTW chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
hazuma: OMG best review I've ever gotten. Everyone else, go home XD
hazuma chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
i hazuma god of trolling acept this ofering and will not feed you to my pet the black beast!
GODHELPME MAKING NEW ACCOUNT56 chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
W... T... F?

This was awesome.