|Reviews for What more can I say?|
| ruth anne chapter 3 . 6/20/2014
THIS IS FUCK!1 WHERE IN THE WORLD IS THE NEXT CHAPPIE?!
| ruth anne chapter 2 . 6/20/2014
loved it! cant wait for the next one. hope he will confess...
| Angelic Homunculus chapter 2 . 6/19/2012
Nice story overall, but watch spelling and grammar. Nicely done!
| SpitfireOTP chapter 3 . 5/1/2012
I love it so far, but I just want to remind you that its a new line for every new speaker. Just a tip.
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/28/2012
| LilMonsterBoy69 chapter 3 . 4/15/2012
the 3 chapters are great!
| coolme26 chapter 2 . 4/10/2012
More dude, i want more come on
| cutiepie41 chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
| whiteraven234 chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
need some more, it's good
| smiley29 chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
i enjoyed this
| lovingjk chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
| rxbblover1200 chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
i like it
| m u know chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
i like it. teehee wow i am bored and tiping this right now. i can't spell. still like stuff
| The Cretin chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
Truthfully, its not bad. Not bad at all. Now it is short but hey, its your story, write it the way you want. I will say that in my experience longer chaps keep readers more interested in stories but as I said, write it how you want. All writers are a seed that needs to grow according to how much light they get. There are some spelling errors but that's no biggie. You'll improve over time. Besides, I know of writers who've been here for years and still can't spell worth a s***. I think you've got a good idea here. The main thing for you to do is to develope it. So take yer time and don't rush. I'll be looking for this next time. Keep rockin
P.S. Don't listen to flamers. Don't let them getcha down. Peace
| GreennaveyblueRaven chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
don't leave me hanging help finish story keep up the good work