|Reviews for In Search of New Dreams|
| AdrianneM chapter 30 . 3/7
I absolutely LOVED this story!
I am pretty much into reading fanfics, especially Harry Potter, but this story is simply perfect, from the characters, Jareth's sweet feelings towards Sarah, which melted my heart, to the plot, which kept my heart beating at an alarming rhythm sometimes (nearly all the time :) ). Therefore, this story it's going to get the 1st place in my personal favourites ranking. Keep writing, you are very talented! We'll wait for more stories/novels from you! :)
| Lady Quotes chapter 30 . 3/5
I would love to hear if you publish anything! This was one of the best stories I've read in a while, going to see what else you've written now. :)
| JaiNess chapter 30 . 2/14
A big fat HURRAH to this magnificent tale. Thank you so much for writing it.
| Lokidaughter13 chapter 30 . 1/10
Wait, where's the sequel!?
| summerb4jc chapter 14 . 1/8
I know the story is complete, so you might not be watching for reviews on this one anymore, but I just wanted to say how much I like this story. A lot of times, when I read Labyrinth fanfics, the romance comes to quickly, and the reader is not given the chance to enjoy these two overcome their differences and fall in love. It's refreshing to see her call on him, and come to the Underground of her own will rather than him kidnapping or tricking her back. I also like that he doesn't come off as a creepy stalker. You have really handled the story well, and have created a unique and beautiful world that we don't see in the movie. This is well written, and very enjoyable. I will probably favorite it once I reach the end. Good job, and keep writing! You are great at it!
| Fluffy the goblin chapter 30 . 12/12/2013
This is so cool! I was screaming the whole time, I was so on edge! You write like a true professional! I was in shock and awe at the manner in which you wrote this! The way you made their relationship progress slowly instead of right away was INCREDIBLE! There are insufficient words to describe your praises! Beyond all comparison, this has left me with tears in my eyes on more than one occasion! I was crying when I thought Jareth died! Please write a sequel! This was gripping and trapped me within the Underground, and I could see the glistening leaves in the palace or the glistening sheen to Fiachna's eyes! The imagery was beyond magnificent, and if there was anyone born to be a writer, then it would most definitely be you! Other writers cannot even hold a spark to your emanating light you create with nothing but words! I loved this story with all of my heart! I could see Seraphina chasing poor Hoggle and noble Didymus speared with obsidian! Your writing brought the shimmering diamond ring to life, and the personalities were so captivating and complex, I couldn't put it down! You have a real gift with writing, don't EVER think otherwise! Please continue writing and creating breathtaking worlds that capture our minds and hearts! You are an inspiration!
| Nubian Queen chapter 30 . 12/11/2013
I am a long time fan of labyrinth and it's fan fiction. As someone who has read A LOT, from the sublime to the ridiculous, let me just say that this is AWESOME!
You took your time and developed a story, not just a porn novel, which characterizes much of fanfic. Your character development was spot on and your world was very believable. I could see it as I read which is a great indicator to me of a well formed story. I love how you developed jareth and Sarah as well. They came across very real.
While there was the occasional bit of misspelling or unclear sentence, it did not detract (or distract) from the story.
I will definitely be putting this on my favs!
Thank you for this great addition to fanfic!
| Jessica chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
Nice first chapter! I can relate with the British spellings. I do it all the time not even thinking about it. Can't wait to click next and read more! The joys of reading completed stories!
| Melissa72 chapter 30 . 11/4/2013
Yay! I liked the ending! Bringing Toby down to be with her. It seemed like he got more attention from Sarah then his own mother. Thank you for sharing God's gift of writing with us ((hug)). Great epi and glad to have Sarah and Jareth reigning together. God bless
| Guest chapter 30 . 10/31/2013
Excellent story. Wonderful from start to finish! Intriguing plot with its twists and turns as well.
| Guest chapter 30 . 10/13/2013
Ok, this is now my 5th time reading this story and I still love it! Have you ever thought about making a sequel to it! Like someone who was close to the Mage comes for revenge or something like that? I would also read that a lot! Please consider that!
| Naoko Matatabi chapter 30 . 10/6/2013
I loved every second of reading this. It's is by far, one of my favorite Labyrinth stories.
| Guest chapter 30 . 9/24/2013
So I was bored of playing video games today and thought "oh I'll go read some Labyrinth fanfic". And so as usual I set my guidelines; Jareth, Sarah, Complete, 10k words... And so I clicked through several fics, read a couple summaries, started a couple chapters...and some I'd read before just didn't catch me this time.
And then I started In Search of New Dreams. Well. That was four hours ago, and I just finished it. From the first paragraph you had me hooked. I like your writing style, it has a good cadence and the words flow well together. Your descriptions are stunning, though sometimes I think a tad overdone but beautiful nonetheless. And you kept everyone in character.
I almost cheered out loud when I read your note about how you weren't going to write the sort of instant-gratification romance, because while I accept there is a place for that in fanfiction, and I enjoy it at times, there is something so much more honest and powerful about the gradual understanding that comes with time between two people who accidentally fall in love with each other. And in this case; so much more in character. IT WAS AWESOME.
I have read a lot of fanfiction, and this is definitely one of my favorites. I had faith in the coming happy ending, or I may have considered actually throwing my iPad across the room when Jareth sent Sarah back Aboveground.
So congratulations! This story is awesome!
And i would love to know when you publish your own works!
| RosieLilyIce93 chapter 30 . 9/24/2013
This has officially become one of my favorite stories! As a Scottish lass myself it was wonderful to see you pull in a lot of the Celtic legend and myth. Your perception of the characters was beautiful! Please let me know about the novels you plan to publish. You've earned a fan for life!
| hotforteacher3 chapter 30 . 9/23/2013
SQUEEEEEE! Awesome! 3 3 3!