Reviews for Loyalty
Chise Sakamoto chapter 7 . 3/27/2016
Awesome! Hope you follow up!
moonshadow chapter 7 . 2/16/2016
I really liked it, if you ever edit it maybe some times will jack isn't being tortured he is thinking about home and HQ and about food, a bath things like that, it makes the story seem more like a real book, and fills it up more. I loved it keep up the great work.
Resident Evil Lionhart chapter 7 . 11/23/2014
More of this would be appreciated and eagerly devoured! XD
Guest chapter 5 . 3/24/2014
Hah 5 days to cut thuogh a shield and this is chapter 5! Lol
Guest chapter 3 . 3/22/2014
Poor jack but good Fanfic
Teshy chapter 7 . 3/23/2014
another awesome story! one I do hope you continue. I loved reading it and have to say You have a real talent for it and making me want to rip out meg's optics lol.
LunarStar98 chapter 7 . 9/21/2013
SEQUELSEQUELSEQUEL PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!
The Thinker2 chapter 7 . 5/20/2013
SEQUEL! please. And O have a few ideas for it if u want.
technoWriter15 chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
:D
Riyappe Paws chapter 7 . 1/29/2013
*sing song* Home is were the heart is!
Riyappe Paws chapter 7 . 1/9/2013
AAAHHHHH! XD Thats so beutiful!
Uniquely chapter 7 . 1/5/2013
I always knew that Jack was loyal!
slmrox978 chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
Continue it please i love love love these stories and i want to know what happens next eeeeek
grimlock.trex99 chapter 3 . 10/8/2012
Oh so now you have scalpel who will forcibly interrogate Jack.
CrazyThats me chapter 7 . 9/13/2012
Oooohhh! Ooohhhh! I want a cookie! It would be cool if you continued this. What would ratchet do? Would he go all mad scientist on jack? How would jack hide his new 'upgrades' from everyone else? What if Vince tried to harm Miko or Raph and jack almost hurt him? Maybe Vince teams up moth megatron and/or mech?
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