Reviews for Loyalty
ladybug02 chapter 7 . 8/6
i loved that story soo much! ;3
Window girl chapter 1 . 5/17
Not a big fan of the pov switch.
Chise Sakamoto chapter 7 . 3/27/2016
Awesome! Hope you follow up!
moonshadow chapter 7 . 2/16/2016
I really liked it, if you ever edit it maybe some times will jack isn't being tortured he is thinking about home and HQ and about food, a bath things like that, it makes the story seem more like a real book, and fills it up more. I loved it keep up the great work.
Resident Evil Lionhart chapter 7 . 11/23/2014
More of this would be appreciated and eagerly devoured! XD
Guest chapter 5 . 3/24/2014
Hah 5 days to cut thuogh a shield and this is chapter 5! Lol
Guest chapter 3 . 3/22/2014
Poor jack but good Fanfic
Teshy chapter 7 . 3/23/2014
another awesome story! one I do hope you continue. I loved reading it and have to say You have a real talent for it and making me want to rip out meg's optics lol.
LunarStar98 chapter 7 . 9/21/2013
SEQUELSEQUELSEQUEL PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!
The Thinker2 chapter 7 . 5/20/2013
SEQUEL! please. And O have a few ideas for it if u want.
technoWriter15 chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
:D
Riyappe Paws chapter 7 . 1/29/2013
*sing song* Home is were the heart is!
Riyappe Paws chapter 7 . 1/9/2013
AAAHHHHH! XD Thats so beutiful!
Uniquely chapter 7 . 1/5/2013
I always knew that Jack was loyal!
slmrox978 chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
Continue it please i love love love these stories and i want to know what happens next eeeeek
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