Reviews for Loyalty
Guest chapter 4 . 12/23/2017
Ok, first of all, Soundwave only has two tentacles, not three, and the abbreviation 'con is mostly used to speak of the Decepticons lightheartedly. In this instance, it would be unusual for the Autobots, especially Optimus, to use it when one of their own has been captured
ladybug02 chapter 7 . 8/6/2017
i loved that story soo much! ;3
Window girl chapter 1 . 5/17/2017
Not a big fan of the pov switch.
Chise Sakamoto chapter 7 . 3/27/2016
Awesome! Hope you follow up!
moonshadow chapter 7 . 2/16/2016
I really liked it, if you ever edit it maybe some times will jack isn't being tortured he is thinking about home and HQ and about food, a bath things like that, it makes the story seem more like a real book, and fills it up more. I loved it keep up the great work.
Resident Evil Lionhart chapter 7 . 11/23/2014
More of this would be appreciated and eagerly devoured! XD
Guest chapter 5 . 3/24/2014
Hah 5 days to cut thuogh a shield and this is chapter 5! Lol
Guest chapter 3 . 3/22/2014
Poor jack but good Fanfic
Teshy chapter 7 . 3/23/2014
another awesome story! one I do hope you continue. I loved reading it and have to say You have a real talent for it and making me want to rip out meg's optics lol.
LunarStar98 chapter 7 . 9/21/2013
The Thinker2 chapter 7 . 5/20/2013
SEQUEL! please. And O have a few ideas for it if u want.
technoWriter15 chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
Riyappe Paws chapter 7 . 1/29/2013
*sing song* Home is were the heart is!
Riyappe Paws chapter 7 . 1/9/2013
AAAHHHHH! XD Thats so beutiful!
Uniquely chapter 7 . 1/5/2013
I always knew that Jack was loyal!
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