|Reviews for To the Flame|
| ianxfalcon chapter 1 . 12/16/2016
Oh, I loved this! Always a pleasure to read a good story about poor Moth, he needs all the love he can get. Although maybe not in that way. I can totally see a person falling for him - people sometimes have a tendency to build up images of someone in their heads that do not in any way reflect reality. Drury's reaction is what really sold it, though. If I were him I'd react the same way.
It was really funny and your use of language is great. Keep it up!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/9/2016
Oh, I love this concept and this was GREAT! Beautifully written too! It's so nice to find fanfiction that doesn't have 100 grammar mistakes. Fantastic job!
| PlaidPajamas01 chapter 1 . 9/16/2014
Awwwww! That ending was so sad and funny! Poor girl. She had good intentions! I really enjoyed this story! And poor moth for getting beat up all the time.
| Crow's Talon chapter 1 . 12/29/2013
This story is hilarious - I love the humor and I love the way you write Killer Moth. I've always found him an interesting character and you write him very well here. The concept between this story is hilarious, and I love the dialogue. It fits the situation in the fic so well and fits the characters beautifully, and you have a real talent for writing Drury. His interactions with Ramsay were well-written, and I loved the detail about what was written on Moth's love letter, especially the "i" in Killer Moth being dotted with a heart.
The ending was both sad, funny, and fit the story well, and there was fantastic pacing in the last few lines. You have a great grip on the character, his personality, and his situation. Killer Moth needs more love, and you did a great job with him here.
Excellent work. This is my favorite Killer Moth story on this site.
| ThatObsessedFreak chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
Lol, damn! Girl's gonna get him killed! Poor Mothy, Blackgate just isn't the place for affection of any kind.
I liked this a lot. Thank you.
| Fell4 chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
Poor girl! Hilarious outcome though!
| BlatantBookworm chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
Cute. Like it.
Poor Killer Moth. As villains go, he's less a dangerous criminal - okay, the kids who picked on Scarecrow when he was little were more dangerous - and more a wannabe who managed to stick around longer than most.
| Twinings chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
Mothy deserves more love. And fewer injuries. Love!