|Reviews for Unbalanced|
| Krizie chapter 18 . 11/26/2017
I love the ending! I wish the original story was more detailed and prolonged, like this one. I felt my face warm because of the fluff hehe. You're an awesome author, the best so far!
| Krizie chapter 16 . 11/25/2017
Such a well written love scene. Nothing graphic but poetic. Love it!
| Krizie chapter 12 . 11/21/2017
This chapter is great. It stays true to the game but added your own twist!
| Krizie chapter 6 . 11/20/2017
Oh noooo Edgar T_T
| Krizie chapter 3 . 11/20/2017
With FF6 being a 16 bit game, I never really thought that the scenes would be like in this chapter.
And that's why it's sometimes better to read FFs, especially if the author is as good as Vrazdova! Each chapter is so well written, you're one of the best authors here!
Poor Locke, his "what ifs" is really heartbreaking.
| LynHime chapter 18 . 4/11/2017
Although, you'll likely never read this, as you haven't updated a story in a few years...
Your writing style is simply superb, and I do hope you continued to use your talents. Even though one of my favorite characters died (Edgar), and the other deaths were very tragic (but fitting as per their characterization), I thoroughly enjoyed your story.
I was somewhat disappointed with the ending, but I think that's more so because it's now over. Continue to use your brilliant mind!
| Dragon MoonX chapter 1 . 3/31/2016
I was shocked when I read about Gau's untimely death after fighting with Death Gaze. It almost made me cry. But I must say you've written a very unique version of this that's not like anything else I've read before. It's not a simple rewrite with a few minor details that have been changed, it's a whole new version of it. Which makes me curious to see what'll happen next because I have no clue where you're taking this.
I'd also like to add that your writing is superb. There's a lot of detail, description and emotion in this. You clearly put a lot of time and effort into making this, and it shows because this is a good quality story, and I'm glad I found it.
| Tenkage-chan chapter 18 . 11/10/2012
I have to say, this is a simply spectacular story. Celes and Locke are my favorite couple in all of FF, and what you've done with this story is simply astounding. I'm sure I'll be reading it over and over again. Thank you so much for such a wonderful take on my favorite Final Fantasy!
| Reasons of Heart chapter 18 . 11/8/2012
This is such an amazing story! It was so creative and well-written like all your other stories. Unbalanced has an interesting approach to the World of Ruin. It seems more realistic because Edgar, Gao, and Cyan died. I like how you emphasize themes of hope, motivation, and strength throughout your story. There's well-developed characterization in your story as well. Keep writing! I really like your stories!
| Laziness Incarna chapter 18 . 10/17/2012
You finished it! Really loved all the twists and turns of this story. Thank you for providing hours of reading pleasure. :D
| REKCUFNIHPLOD chapter 18 . 8/25/2012
I live in the shadows... It is impossible to find me.
| Bowpurity chapter 18 . 6/25/2012
Just. Pure Amazing.
Thank you for writing this. Not only did I find no fault, but this was an amazingly enjoyable read.
Keep on writing.
| Margaret Rennie chapter 18 . 6/16/2012
Take a bow, Madam. This was an outstanding tale that I fully enjoyed. All the effort and imagination that you put into it shows. Thank you so much for writing it!
| Majin Blues chapter 18 . 6/12/2012
Well done, I am sad to see so many die but it stressed upon the desperation and hopelessness of the events that occured. Continue writing my friend.
| Valkyrie Celes chapter 18 . 6/6/2012
Daw cute fluffy Locke/Celes ending! Loveee XD I super enjoyed this story, and if you ever thought about doing a sequel I'd so be there to read it...just sayin. Love the ending for each character, awesome job as per always!