Reviews for An ordinary lovestory
Superles chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
I don't mind you cleaning up my story as I wrote very fast, during class years ago, but I would like it if you put that I originally wrote the story/idea.

Thanks

Superles
StraightJacket xD chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
Nice story. Really sweet. Kinda fluffy at the ending as well

Also im loving the Fast and Furious reference. Letty Ortiz. It was really subtle

StraightJacket xD
Rot'nix chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
This is almost identical to Superles "Schooltime" published 02-21-11 here at ( s/6763969/1/School_Time). The mayor difference is that this version is cleaner and more tidy.
hmmm chapter 1 . 3/30/2012
Cute. A bit choppy but a fun read. The only other comment I have is why is Scud only finding out about the kiss after spring break when they live together so he would of seen her looking like "shit" way before spring break ended.